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The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Litronom - 02-02-2012 04:19 AM

Heres mine and my brothers first small custom story.

THE SMALL HORSE I - THE ESCAPE
Contains:
-custom ported models
-custom sounds and materials
-an unique story
-dedicated to some guys (one of them is mapping around here)
-[and pony!]

may contain some german speech, so dont be angry bout that.

The full story isnt very serious, but half. the other half, it's fun. so enjoy the fun, and think about the serious.

Download it here:

Download removed due to piracy.

...If you find any bugs, stomp them....


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Obliviator27 - 02-02-2012 06:08 AM

Lookee lookee. A new story. Trying it out? You bet.
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Spoiler below!

- Punted your map_cache files. You really don't need to include those, as they just make the filesize larger than it needs to be.
- Pony map. Hm. Have yet to see one of these. Not a brony, not am I a hater. Just neutral.
- Your player Start position is too high. If you lower it, it won't "drop" the player.
- King of Red lions on the desk? Sweet.
- Going to either guess English isn't your first language. If it is, shame on you.
- ReDeads.....damn things scared the crap out of me when I was a kid. Nice import.
- The blood decal after going up the stairs is clipping. You can fix this by moving it up by 0.001.
- The ReDead keeps screaming at me. Personally, I think you should have made that it's notice sound.
- Ohai statues.
- You put welders between cellarbase walls!!! This pleases me.
- Hi pig.
- *raises eyebrow* Incredibly stretched Sanity Potion. Hm. Was the model I saw from resident evil?
- Apparently the doom key is going to rape me.
- Adding ambient music would help this level a lot. Breaks the silence.
- I....don't know what I just saw, but it's laughing at me.
- Used the Doomkey. The torch in the middle of the room clips. Again, you can use the 0.001 trick to fix it.
- The giant knife is a picklock. It should probably be lockpick.
- Forcing me to look at the pig shadow. Strange, but I wouldn't have noticed it otherwise.
- Just got dropped into a hallway. All doors are locked. I would recommend that you ise the same door on both sides of the map change. Keeps a sense of continuity.
- Holy tinderboxes. A key is amid them, so that's nice.
- No clue who Paracelsus is. I don't intend to feed it to an animal, though.
- I think you're trying to have a story. But I'm hardly seeing it. All I know is there's a cult of some kind, and I'm in an upside down room.
- Pikachu! Big Grin
- Pokeball...oh my god, do I really? I'm excited.
- Aw. Was expecting an awesome effect. Oh well.
- I thank you greatly for removing all of those keys from my inventory. Probably should have named them, though.
- Some antlered thing. Not sure what it was.
- *sigh* I really do have to look through all of these...don't I?
- Oh, there's a thing on the door.
- Creepy cat thing in my face. Hi.
- Grunt. I've dealt with you so many times, I'll just run around you, kthxbai.
- Some roof clipping in this map. Also, I can see gaps around the hole in the wall.
- Pony statues. Cool stuff.
- Getting attacked by ReDeads who showed up out of nowhere. How dare they.
- Who the heck is this guy?
- I can tell the audio was ripped from youtube videos. I know some german, but not enough to understand what he said.
- Ohai Pinkie Pie. At least, I think that's your name.
- You really didn't include a StartCredits? Sloppy, sorry. I can't forgive that one.

Well, it was strange, and nice to see some imported models. No real story, though. The mapping wasn't bad, but it wasn't superb either. Not bad for a first attempt, but it could have been better. I'd be a lot harsher on this, but you did say it was a silly custom.


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Beer - 02-02-2012 03:12 PM

I'll play it! Big Grin

Holy mother of GOD that was so epic!
Video coming up!!!!






RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Litronom - 02-02-2012 04:26 PM

well it wasnt supposed to be a good story at all. and no, english isnt my first language. so i wont shame ^^.
and beercake, have fun with playin it Wink


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Ivan4ik - 02-02-2012 06:05 PM

Cool map. Though short, but I liked it. Credits would put at the end.


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Litronom - 02-02-2012 06:12 PM

Yeah i definetly should've done that.


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Skashi - 02-02-2012 06:19 PM

MY NEW FAVORITE STORY *O*
Can i use some entities for my next map pls? ;_;


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Litronom - 02-02-2012 06:22 PM

of course you can! everybody can use or change them

[german]
hast du die referenz auf deinen namen bemerkt? Wink
[/german]


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Skashi - 02-02-2012 06:29 PM

(02-02-2012 06:22 PM)Litronom Wrote:  of course you can! everybody can use or change them

[german]
hast du die referenz auf deinen namen bemerkt? Wink
[/german]
Ich bin zu doofig um den satz zu verstehen Tongue


RE: The Small Horse I - The Escape [Custom Story] - Litronom - 02-02-2012 06:30 PM

(02-02-2012 06:29 PM)Skashi Wrote:  Ich bin zu doofig um den satz zu verstehen Tongue
dein name, Skashi. ich hab ihn im spiel eingebaut (natürlich nicht so offensichtlich Wink )
deshalb frag ich