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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Zokrar - 06-18-2013

Thanks for the feedback! Seeing as it's not just me that likes the idea, I'll add much more detail and post it again later on Smile

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-18-2013

Also set the tiling lower on the textures.
And I'd use another texture for the ceiling.

Make it darker. It's really too light.
Try make it much darker, and then add lights to the map.
I know this is going away from the drawing, but if it can get better, then do it.
The walls doesn't look like the drawing either, so adding light wouldn't hurt. Smile

(I approve white night textures as walls, instead of those mansion base.)

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Zokrar - 06-19-2013

Here's a bit of an update on what I was working on earlier. Smile
I'm still fairly new to modding. If I could get some tips on particle systems, I'd be more than grateful.

Original drawing:
Spoiler below!
[Image: 0AWYdfV.jpg]

First draft:
Spoiler below!
[Image: 7MLb0eS.jpg]

Second draft:
Spoiler below!
[Image: TGqMOKm.jpg]

How is my second draft, compared to first?

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-19-2013

Now you've got details on, and that's great. Period.

Your floor could need lower texture tiling.
I'd still like some lights instead of this white light that is everywhere. But you're the one to decide this.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - PutraenusAlivius - 06-19-2013

(06-19-2013, 06:58 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: Now you've got details on, and that's great. Period.

Your floor could need lower texture tiling.
I'd still like some lights instead of this white light that is everywhere. But you're the one to decide this.

Not sure if referring to the picture or what.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-19-2013

The blood... I just couldn't.. Nah, forget it Tongue

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Zokrar - 06-19-2013

What do you mean by lower texture tiling? And is the blood not a good touch?

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-19-2013

[Image: 349eand.png]

For larger view: Right click>Open image on a new page

See the difference?

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Zokrar - 06-19-2013

Definitely. Thanks

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Wapez - 06-19-2013

I'd like to know what you guys think about the way I make the torch light up the surroundings.

[Image: amnesia_chair_zps86a82089.jpg]

http://i1342.photobucket.com/albums/o773/Wapez1/amnesia_chair_zps86a82089.jpg