(11-01-2013, 02:24 AM)Kia Wrote: Billboards look a little too bright in the first one - the room's too dark for them to be that light, and the air's too clean for them to be that thick. Maybe try toning them down to... 50% of whatever they are now? The lighting's also a little bit too dark, looks like you either have a very, very dark boxlight or no boxlight at all.

Other than that, I really like your use of pillars and bookshelves; the layout is fantastic!

(11-01-2013, 02:11 PM)Hardy Floppy Arm Wrote: I really love the colours in that pic. It really reminds of FG maps
If you work a bit more on architecture and level design you should be perfect

(11-01-2013, 04:49 PM)Hardy Floppy Arm Wrote: I don't really know what to say about it because that's you to decide how to organize those. it's just.. make the sets of object more appealing and less plain to the eyes.
For example, paintings and sketches aren't always 100% perpendicular to the ground. Rotate them a little, would be cool even by just 1 degree.
Also, in the shelves section, they aren't always fully 100% in line, rotate them by 1 degree like before, try to hint there's a bit of chaos in those.

In that room there are two sections that look almost equal to each other, because there seem to be too many lines of shelves, which look artificial and boring. Just remove the line against the wall at the other side of the room and put something else?

Hints for detailing: try near the shelves to add some book piles and some books laid against a shelf and other ones at the ground. Make it at the borders so you don't obstruct the player's gameplay by having annoying objects cutting his path.

Also, for the lighting, make the billboards more faint and the light of the window more shallow. Avoid using too many light and contrast points in a unique room: if you want a light zone and there is another smaller/bigger one next to it, just chain them together (as, light the section between the one and the another) and put some details in the 'chaining area, BUT, in that case, in the first room, just remove that banner because it doesn't look that good in that position. there must be more attention to the door other than to the banner right? and it's too near the door it just looks bad

Anyways, the complex is really cool and I love the lighting colours as I said and details are great

Spoiler below!

Sorry it's not a huge impressive update. I've been working on actually fleshing out the floors that aren't displayed here (mainly because they look pretty boring at the moment). But I tried to incorporate the advice I was given the last time I posted the library here - feels like ages ago. I know you've already seen the first one on there - I just couldn't resist including it anyways. I didn't tweak much - just a few details.

Any feedback at all would be much appreciated, I'll respond when I wake up tomorrow morning!

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Spoiler below!

Spoiler below!