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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Putmalk - 02-26-2014

I made another video tour of another map. Took me about a week to create, I have other videos on my channel showcasing the construction of the level.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2uJydN5EDWs

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - i3670 - 03-01-2014

Tell me what you think.

Spoiler below!

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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 03-01-2014

First picture is great.
Since there's not supposed to be much detail, play with the lighting some more to make the corridor dynamic.
Also, The floor get much more attention from light, than the walls. Give the walls some more light. That would make more sense.

Second picture. You have a lot of green lamps. How about just removing 1 of them. If there's a green lamp on every desk, it looks like a Ctrl+V, Ctrl+C, which IMO becomes repetetive and boring. Variate the desks a little so they seem different to each other. The green lamps are what first catches your eye when you look at the desk, and if that's what happens at all the desks, it becomes boring.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - i3670 - 03-01-2014

I see what you're getting at but from a logical perspective every desk should have a lamp of some sort. I'll see of I can get the desklamp from Penumbra to work, just to get some variation.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 03-01-2014

(03-01-2014, 12:58 PM)i3670 Wrote: I see what you're getting at but from a logical perspective every desk should have a lamp of some sort. I'll see of I can get the desklamp from Penumbra to work, just to get some variation.

Great Wink
Of course every desk should have a lamp. But there are so many lamps. You can have a lamp from the ceiling. A lamp hanging from the wall, or just a candle. Anything's possible Wink

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - i3670 - 03-01-2014

Made some minor changes to the lighting. Example the wall in the first picture.

Spoiler below!

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Also, I couldn't get the desklamp from Penumbra work.

Edit: Update, same map, different location.

Spoiler below!

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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - i3670 - 03-03-2014

I feel that a screenshot won't cover the things that I've changed during these two days. It kind of spiralled out of control at one point. Anyway, use the link to download my map. Have a look around.

http://www.mediafire.com/view/21drpox7o3swfca/whateveaas.map

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - LordOfDragons - 03-04-2014

I cant really see the screens on my Phone, they are dark but it looks nice. I love amfp stuff. Long live the new assets.

Awww i would like to show some pics too but my wlan stuff completely broke some days ago... No Internet on my laptop.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Putmalk - 03-04-2014

More screenshots, this is a library.

Spoiler below!


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Artyom - 03-05-2014

Some screenshots from Helena
http://www.moddb.com/mods/amnesia-helena

Spoiler below!

Pic 1-3 were taken on separate dates which explains why the billboards are not there on the other.
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