(06-23-2014, 10:07 PM)Badcat5550 Wrote: Just played it, These are some bugs you could fix!

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1.The whole place is dark, lighten a few areas up a bit.

2.If you keep pulling the lever in the kitchen,
it keeps giving you the sanity boost and it plays the music!

3. The room where there's a violin, a hipotautum, there is one big doorway with nothingness inside, pitchblack, out of map!

4. Where's the story in game?? and how did the game start to turn into the crooked man game because of that note on the table?

(06-23-2014, 09:59 PM)i3670 Wrote: Some of my critique:

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- Well, it's certainly pitchblack.
- Too many lamps even though they are off.
- Too many rugs.
- Obvious PDP-reference.
- Tile amount, too high. (planes).
- Lacking structure. There's too many different rooms in the same area.
- Copy-pasted bookshelves never look good.
- The bathroom sink is in head-height.
- Decals where art thou?
- Cellarbase needs welders between walls.
- Seweroutlets in the cellar? No wonder the place is flooded.

I think that's enough for now.

(06-25-2014, 01:25 PM)DnALANGE Wrote: Here is what i found out :
1: Sink at the start is WAY to high, how can i wash hands in there
2: The rooftiles in the Pooltable room are way to small.
3: Kitchen sign is off the wall
4: WHy in the name a jumpscare like that, makes no sense at all!
5: At the end at the water floor, there is a roof part missing , can see trough the roof.
6: The big area with the anteater etc, should be the last room you made i guess.. makes no sens ... why so many lamps at the ceiling??

Spoiler below!

1: Sink is now in hand height
3: Kitchen sign is on the wall
4: Removed jumpscare
5: Repaired the roof
6: I guess it's better than what I had before. A long completely black hallway with the orb's particle system and fade-out