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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Radical Batz - 12-14-2014 Sexy... other than that, You could make a few plants coming out of the sea, the fog and lighting is perfect..t here really isn't much to change. ps: Did u make a spotlight coming up from the hole and into the sea? RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Romulator - 12-22-2014 An "old-ish" motel apartment room. Probably have done better in the past. Opinions? should have closed the door. Full Size: http://puu.sh/dEU4s/a97bc08113.jpg RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Mudbill - 12-22-2014 I think it looks great. Though, you might wanna try to rid that light clipping in the center corner. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Newsman Waterpaper - 12-22-2014 Maybe put some dirt decals on the floor? RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Kurton - 12-22-2014 Raise/scale the counter to be flush with the stovetop, it's low enough now that it looks more like just some box or trunk. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CarnivorousJelly - 12-25-2014 Look who's not dead! Yeah right, no one actually missed me, but I'll pretend you were all super sad at my 4 month hiatus. *cracks knuckles* Let's get right to the critique! Rom Spoiler below!
Neelke Spoiler below!
Badcat Spoiler below!
Endosine, your screenshots are beautiful as always c: I'm way too out of practice to provide decent critique. That was my 1000th post... damn! I don't shut up, do I? RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CarnivorousJelly - 12-27-2014 It's not fair to tease us HPL2 users like that :c Nice room though :D RE: Screenshot criticism thread - The chaser - 12-28-2014 As I see that this thread is getting near to the 300 page, I'll think I'll make something special... Maybe not the best map around here, but, just a surprise for you guys :3 RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Radical Batz - 12-28-2014 Started making a sewer cavern level and this is how it came up! http://www.moddb.com/mods/the-barns-secrets/images/the-end RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rapture - 12-28-2014 Seriously!? Spoiler tags for a link that I have to copy and paste? >.> You got the environment blocked out, but the atmosphere is missing. You have some fog, but the water reflections is killing it. (Put some black planes behind the wall to help cancel it out or use any other tricks you got) You have a little bit of light pouring through, but the cave is to evenly lit. The point of entry for your light-rays should be worked on the most as it should be the main highlight of your picture. Your cages are all standing vertically up, rotate and push them around. You need to add some life or some color variation, to much brown rocks everywhere. |