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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Kurton - 07-01-2015

(06-30-2015, 12:16 PM)Rahmerh Wrote: Like I said, I wanted to get the light right, first. But I'm going to dress the room up first, see how it looks Smile Thanks!

EDIT: New screenshot Smile
Spoiler below!
[Image: 8N5hZ6i.png]

I think the fog color could match that of the light a lot more. Generally, plain grey puffs of particles look way out of place

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Radical Batz - 07-01-2015

Trying to work on a bluish contrast, but I don't know if there should be more details inputted in here.
Any feedback?

[Image: hygWc08.jpg?1]

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Neelke - 07-01-2015

(07-01-2015, 10:20 AM)Mr. Badcatz Wrote: Trying to work on a bluish contrast, but I don't know if there should be more details inputted in here.
Any feedback?

[Image: hygWc08.jpg?1]

Use the Ptest cobwebs, plox.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 07-01-2015

(07-01-2015, 04:01 AM)Kurton Wrote:
(06-30-2015, 12:16 PM)Rahmerh Wrote: Like I said, I wanted to get the light right, first. But I'm going to dress the room up first, see how it looks Smile Thanks!

EDIT: New screenshot Smile
Spoiler below!
[Image: 8N5hZ6i.png]

I think the fog color could match that of the light a lot more. Generally, plain grey puffs of particles look way out of place

Alright, changed it and it looks much better Smile Thanks!

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 07-01-2015

Screenshot of a storage room. What do you guys think?

Spoiler below!
[Image: NbbxMti.png]
The door leads to a storage cellar. The way out is to the right, out the screen.


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - MatiCekuriel - 07-01-2015

So here is the first version of the menu for the second chapter of my future custom story Tongue
It's mostly black, but sometimes it is lighted by a purple light Wink

Spoiler below!

So dark :
[Image: 1435770193-2015-07-01-00002.jpg] (usually, the electricity on the right has a point light, but as it flickers pretty fast, I took the screenshot when the light was black :/ )


And lighted :
[Image: 1435770193-2015-07-01-00001.jpg]



We can't see on the screenshots but there are wires at the end of the right arm !

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - MatiCekuriel - 07-02-2015

And here is the first version of the menu for the third and final chapter Tongue

Spoiler below!

[Image: 1435836295-2015-07-02-00001.jpg]



RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Slanderous - 07-02-2015

(07-01-2015, 01:42 PM)Rahmerh Wrote: Screenshot of a storage room. What do you guys think?

Spoiler below!
[Image: NbbxMti.png]
The door leads to a storage cellar. The way out is to the right, out the screen.

Looks really awesome imho. If you could do something with these pale walls, though. Maybe put some cracks or other details so it looks better.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 07-02-2015

Good call, I'll try something out Smile

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Radical Batz - 07-03-2015

Changed some stuff, what do you guys think?

[Image: iBclMHM.jpg]