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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 07-07-2015

Sorry for posting so much, but I really value what you guys think of my maps..

Spoiler below!
[Image: 2bEu1U2.png]
I had some problems with the lighting, so any tips are very welcome!


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - The chaser - 07-07-2015

(07-07-2015, 08:09 AM)Rahmerh Wrote: Sorry for posting so much, but I really value what you guys think of my maps..

Spoiler below!
[Image: 2bEu1U2.png]
I had some problems with the lighting, so any tips are very welcome!

In my opinion, the candles are making way too much light, while the windows don't have many importance. I'd say to increase the windows light and to turn down the candles light. Maybe a couple of particles of dust would be nice, too.

That's all I see, maybe someone else can help you more :p

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 07-07-2015

(07-07-2015, 09:36 AM)The chaser Wrote:
(07-07-2015, 08:09 AM)Rahmerh Wrote: Sorry for posting so much, but I really value what you guys think of my maps..

Spoiler below!
[Image: 2bEu1U2.png]
I had some problems with the lighting, so any tips are very welcome!

In my opinion, the candles are making way too much light, while the windows don't have many importance. I'd say to increase the windows light and to turn down the candles light. Maybe a couple of particles of dust would be nice, too.

That's all I see, maybe someone else can help you more :p

Thank you! I increased the size of the blue lights and added some fog particles, looks much better now! Thanks!

EDIT: I might've overdid the fog a little bit, but I'm liking the lighting much more! (I removed most of the fog after I took this screenshot)

Spoiler below!
[Image: hZfVeHs.png]


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - MatiCekuriel - 07-07-2015

I think nobody has seen my screenshots on the previous page Tongue
It's too bad because I really care about what you think Undecided

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 07-07-2015

(07-07-2015, 08:58 PM)MatiCekuriel Wrote: I think nobody has seen my screenshots on the previous page Tongue
It's too bad because I really care about what you think Undecided

I've seen them, but I hardly have any comments. They're atypical for the usual amnesia backgrounds.

For the fire-bg I think it would be more interesting to see the buildings from ground level, instead of being in the air. This way you can focus on a specific thing that is one fire, which makes it a little more interesting, than just an overview of the city.
That's my opinion.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Gilligan's Hell - 07-08-2015

with light rays
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with less visable torch billboards
[Image: CgyI7jn.png]

whats better ?

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 07-08-2015

I'd say the second. It's already dark outside, there shouldnt be very bricht light rays Smile

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 07-08-2015

Nice lighting. Maybe add a very dim red/orange light above the candles, so they don't just end in darkness.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Gilligan's Hell - 07-09-2015

edited it
[Image: Amnesia_2015-07-09_19-19-29-14.png]

another wip
[Image: Amnesia_2015-07-09_19-19-42-30.png]

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Radical Batz - 07-16-2015

Making a Cistern level. I am running out of details 'objects, equipment, furnitare..etc'
Any critics folks?

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