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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Nanatsumi - 12-13-2015

[Image: Amnesia_2015-12-12_19-52-26-787.jpg]

From my mod Raleigh

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - Newsman Waterpaper - 12-13-2015

(12-13-2015, 10:54 AM)NickLeiden Wrote: [Image: Amnesia_2015-12-12_19-52-26-787.jpg]

From my mod Raleigh

More detail on the walls and floors and more lamps on the walls. Turn down the intensity of the fog.

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 12-13-2015

Make the fog darker, and in the same color as the lighting. (It seems too blue and unnatural)
Turn down the intensity of the boxlight a little bit.

It's too empty. We need plants along the walls. Paintings too. Maybe a couple of chairs lying around.
On the floor underneath there could easily be a table.
Also remember carpets! Carpets are important. Make them look natural. Not too stretched.

I'm not sure I understand the architecture. Why the extra platform-sides in the middle?

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - Nanatsumi - 12-14-2015

(12-13-2015, 07:46 PM)FlawlessHappiness Wrote: Make the fog darker, and in the same color as the lighting. (It seems too blue and unnatural)
Turn down the intensity of the boxlight a little bit.

It's too empty. We need plants along the walls. Paintings too. Maybe a couple of chairs lying around.
On the floor underneath there could easily be a table.
Also remember carpets! Carpets are important. Make them look natural. Not too stretched.

I'm not sure I understand the architecture. Why the extra platform-sides in the middle?

[Image: RfXGynRi-vE.jpg]
Fog and Boxlight are darker now(in screenshot is not, but in level editor it's darker), Carpets are in Bedroom and in First Floor. Some bookshelfs, Raleigh's sister portrait in first floor
Thanks for criticism!

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - Traggey - 12-14-2015

Things.

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RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - Mudbill - 12-14-2015

Somehow those torches cast even less light than Amnesia's. But it's spooky as all hell and I love it <3

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - Neelke - 12-15-2015

That's really awesome, Traggey.

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - DanielRand47 - 12-15-2015

Has a Doom feel to it.

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 12-15-2015

I love it Traggey!

As Mudbill pointed out, I wish I could see a little more orange glow from the lights.

It also feels like some places were pitch black, but that may just be because it's a picture.

RE: [Amnesia] Screenshot criticism thread - Koopa Rs07 - 12-16-2015

I'm no expert at map editing, but these images are from my upcoming custom story, "The Black Eagle Castle", and I need to see what I can improve on.

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