(04-11-2012, 06:47 PM)Shives Wrote:

(04-08-2012, 09:55 PM)Kaizy Wrote: Yeah, I can't combine the chipper and hammer, so I can't continue, but I've played enough to know what I have to say

Spoiler below!

Your map is nearly nothing but jumpscares. Teleporting naked guys, poofers...just everything you could hate in a story's scares is right in there. Enemies literally spawn right in front of you at times, and there is no excuse for that. Your story had some bugs: as stated the hammer and chipper refuse to combine, and the music that plays will stop when you die. Also, I could not for the life of me find a lantern. I was getting lots of oil for it, but I never once saw a lantern anywhere.

It wasn't horrible, but it needs severe work in the scare department, as well as fixing that hammer/chipper glitch.

There was a Lantern but it was hidden

RATING:
LevelDesign: 6/10 (It's at some places empty and to many unnatural white lights, nest time change the color of them but sometimes It's cool)

Story:8/10 (It's a good and short story)

Scares:2/10 (You just used Jumpscares and they are cheap)

Totalscore: 16/30

For the next time:
Change the light colors to ...

Use better scares, for example you are hearing a noise or something is beating against the door or...

Place PathNodeAreas for enemys

Place more entities in the Leveleditor

(04-21-2012, 11:34 AM)Dafty Wrote: Very cool story good job and nice ending (and credit)