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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - No Author - 03-10-2013

(03-10-2013, 12:18 AM)Hardarm Wrote: The detailing there looks awesome robosprog, but I kinda have to agree with martin nord! Tongue



Some WIP Edge room Smile
[Image: EEZ02.png]

That looks really nice. I like itSmile

Also, did you make all the stuff by yourself ?

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Hardarm - 03-10-2013

(03-10-2013, 10:15 AM)No Author Wrote: That looks really nice. I like it:

Also, did you make all the stuff by yourself ?

Thanks!

And no, I've got the assets from Entart3t. (you can find them in development resource), but it takes a lot of time with those to do a good detailed room because of all the cables, pipes and shit D:

Anyway the room should be part of Edge: Elysium Zero by Danny Boy. You can find the story thread in the forums. Smile

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rapture - 03-10-2013

Your pipe on the right is clipping the wall to much, move it over anyway you wish.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - WALP - 03-12-2013

Your fire looks pretty awesome robo especially in the first pic.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CarnivorousJelly - 03-12-2013

Same map as before (different room); did I get enough decals in this part?
Spoiler below!

[Image: so_many_books_by_rueppells_fox-d5xrl9t.jpg]

I'll upload the night-time pics for this same area on Friday maybe

and Robo, I love the maps Big Grin Can't wait for your FC to come out

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rapture - 03-12-2013

Could barely tell the Spotlight had Shadows on...

Does that color seem right to you guys? Doesn't seem like something the Sun would generate normally, even during that awesome reddish cloud moments that last for a couple of minutes before the Sun goes down.

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - PutraenusAlivius - 03-12-2013

(03-12-2013, 06:16 AM)Rapture Wrote: Could barely tell the Spotlight had Shadows on...

Does that color seem right to you guys? Doesn't seem like something the Sun would generate normally, even during that awesome reddish cloud moments that last for a couple of minutes before the Sun goes down.

I guess so. I don't even know why it is red. Now i have a question;
How the f**k did Kiandra make that billboard look nice?!

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 03-12-2013

(03-12-2013, 06:37 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote:
(03-12-2013, 06:16 AM)Rapture Wrote: Could barely tell the Spotlight had Shadows on...

Does that color seem right to you guys? Doesn't seem like something the Sun would generate normally, even during that awesome reddish cloud moments that last for a couple of minutes before the Sun goes down.

I guess so. I don't even know why it is red. Now i have a question;
How the f**k did Kiandra make that billboard look nice?!

It's all about perspective

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I like it Kiandra! I looks like you put a pointlight in the middle, and that's nice! You might want to put some books on the floor that hasn't been opened too. Maybe some papers lying around, ripped out from the books.

Think about: Would there be dust in this room?

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CarnivorousJelly - 03-12-2013

(03-12-2013, 06:16 AM)Rapture Wrote: Could barely tell the Spotlight had Shadows on...
I'll turn it off then; no reason to slow down slower computers for minimal effect.

(03-12-2013, 06:16 AM)Rapture Wrote: Does that color seem right to you guys? Doesn't seem like something the Sun would generate normally, even during that awesome reddish cloud moments that last for a couple of minutes before the Sun goes down.
I'll admit, it is rather red but I wasn't really aiming for realism (at least, not for sun colour). It's better than the horrendous yellow I had in there earlier xD
Colours I'm currently using for the room are:

Darkest --------------------------->Lightest
R 0.196 -> 0.392 -> 0.920 -> 1.000 -> 1.000
G 0.049 -> 0.133 -> 0.472 -> 0.558 -> 0.660
B 0.000 -> 0.051 -> 0.121 -> 0.138 -> 0.293
(Alpha stays constant at 0.010)

Might revise that a bit.... just a bit.

(03-12-2013, 06:37 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: I guess so. I don't even know why it is red.
Because the sun's about to set and night time will happen and shit will go down in that room (muahaha)!

(03-12-2013, 06:37 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: Now i have a question;

How the f**k did Kiandra make that billboard look nice?!
Like this:
Spoiler below!

[Image: i_m_done_by_rueppells_fox-d5xrnyh.jpg]

Set the billboard colour to 0.392, 0.133, 0.051, 0.010 (RGB A) which is dark brownish-red, framed the window in billboards and traced the outside of the spotlight (to the best of my ability) with them... and added fog of a similar colour to the area.

Alright, I'm done for the night. See you all tomorrow! (Lies and bull crap, now I want to work on this map more) :
(03-12-2013, 06:51 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: It's all about perspective

Indeed it is Big Grin

(03-12-2013, 06:51 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: I like it Kiandra! I looks like you put a pointlight in the middle, and that's nice!
Exactly what I ended up doing hehe, thanks
(03-12-2013, 06:51 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: You might want to put some books on the floor that hasn't been opened too. Maybe some papers lying around, ripped out from the books.
Oooh, I like that idea. Thanks!

(03-12-2013, 06:51 AM)BeeKayK Wrote: Think about: Would there be dust in this room?

Maybe, maybe not (maybe I just really really like billboards and dust because they look pretty). It's in the 'abandoned' part of the house past the destroyed atrium... probably indicates that I should make it messier Tongue

RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Hardarm - 03-12-2013

Kiandra, I fucking love that billboard. You're becoming better and better at mapping! I think your forte, though, it's the lighting.

Anyway, I've updated my scifi room and I've got 2 different colour versions.

What do you prefer, Blue or Red?

Blue: [Image: EEZ03.png]

Red: [Image: EEZ03red.png]