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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - VillainousPotato - 04-20-2013 (04-20-2013, 05:28 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote:(04-20-2013, 04:08 AM)NightmareBrothers Wrote: My updated screenshots! tell me whats bad about them.It looks too dark. Hmm alright. I lightened it up from the last time with box light and some point lights. But I'll add some more light sources. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rapture - 04-20-2013 Make sure you have pointlights with Shadows turned on. Better the objects cast shadows. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Hardarm - 04-20-2013 (04-20-2013, 02:10 PM)Rapture Wrote: Make sure you have pointlights with Shadows turned on. Better the objects cast shadows. You mean spotlights? RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Acies - 04-20-2013 (04-20-2013, 04:08 AM)NightmareBrothers Wrote: My updated screenshots! tell me whats bad about them.No. 3 has the highest potential lighting-wise IMO. It fits the light shining in from a window during night. I would reduce the boxlight and increase the spotlight to create more contrast. Create some lightdust and subtle billboards. No. 1 & 2 aren't too interesting lighting-wise. I'm assuming the light in No.2 originates from the lamp to the right in the picture, but the lightcolor doesn't match the lightcolor of the lamp. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - VillainousPotato - 04-20-2013 Thank you! I'll get to work on adjusting the lighting again and adding some small billboards. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rapture - 04-20-2013 (04-20-2013, 02:20 PM)Hardarm Wrote:Ya spotlights, I keep confusing the names xD(04-20-2013, 02:10 PM)Rapture Wrote: Make sure you have pointlights with Shadows turned on. Better the objects cast shadows. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CarnivorousJelly - 04-20-2013 (04-20-2013, 04:08 AM)NightmareBrothers Wrote: My updated screenshots! tell me whats bad about them. Image One Spoiler below!
Second Image Spoiler below!
Third Image Spoiler below!
Aaaaaand I think that's it. I put everything in categorized spoilers to make navigating it a little bit easier. Hopefully this helps at least a little bit. Feel free to ignore anything/everything I said if you disagree with it RE: Screenshot criticism thread - VillainousPotato - 04-20-2013 Thank you everyone! Hopefully I can get this going with at least a decent mapping job. RE: Screenshot criticism thread - wubwub - 04-20-2013 (03-09-2013, 10:04 PM)Kiandra Wrote: Went back and looked at my first map... Decided it needed revamping. What do you guys think? good! RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CarnivorousJelly - 04-20-2013 Oh man, I forgot about those screenshots! That was such a long time ago. Hehe. Euhm, thanks? |