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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Hardarm - 05-10-2013
(05-10-2013, 10:14 AM)The chaser Wrote: Here's a little storage room I made (please note that I'm horrible at mapping) and I'd like to know your critics:
You are in a mansion in. That's how I later explain the body parts and things, but I mainly need advice about lighting.Spoiler below!
![[Image: ZYj0bHD.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/ZYj0bHD.jpg)
You need to take time on that, there's too much light for 5-6 candles there.
Try to create gradients, lighter near the candle and dark far away from it.
That doesn't look like a storage room anyway, It looks like a room with some straight barrels and boxes placed upon a floor. It's "madness" it's not twister (lol)
Make a lot of dirt, rolled down boxes, rotated shelves and fallen down shelves.
Don't make em grid snapped, naturize them! Nobody is stopping you from rotating them a bit.
You have to focus at least 2 hours on creating a decent room, because you can.
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Weell.. Since that s**t was fake at least i'd want some criticism on it
What do you think?
![[Image: amfpsecretimageHQ.png]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35955357/amfpsecretimageHQ.png)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - PutraenusAlivius - 05-10-2013
![[Image: 4eXLIN5.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/4eXLIN5.jpg)
Just give what the hell is wrong with it.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Hardarm - 05-10-2013
(05-10-2013, 12:47 PM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote:
Just give what the hell is wrong with it.
Light looks very sparse. looks like the light is coming out of nowhere. Plus there is poor mapping, solve that with ornaments.
NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?
That's not cool, that image okay, it's been viewed a lot because it was a part of that 'joke', but what about some other ones? You did the same thing, I wanted some criticism on that image, I never paste images under not-criticized ones, or at least, I try to review it and then do it.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - PutraenusAlivius - 05-10-2013
(05-10-2013, 12:55 PM)Hardarm Wrote:(05-10-2013, 12:47 PM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote:
Just give what the hell is wrong with it.
Light looks very sparse. looks like the light is coming out of nowhere. Plus there is poor mapping, solve that with ornaments.
NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?
That's not cool, that image okay, it's been viewed a lot because it was a part of that 'joke', but what about some other ones? You did the same thing, I wanted some criticism on that image, I never paste images under not-criticized ones, or at least, I try to review it and then do it.
Coincidence. But seriously, I was going to the bathroom first. A guy cannot hold pee. God.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Adny - 05-10-2013
(05-10-2013, 12:55 PM)Hardarm Wrote: NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?
lol
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Hardarm - 05-10-2013
(05-10-2013, 01:04 PM)Adny Wrote:(05-10-2013, 12:55 PM)Hardarm Wrote: NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?
lol
http://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/thread-11760-post-205239.html#pid205239
http://www.frictionalgames.com/forum/thread-11760-post-207051.html#pid207051
In the first one I got criticism from you, but it was a fairly big zone so I preferred to have some other people to be criticized, I mean 40 mins had passed :x
Second one... turn the page lol
Anyways, peace. I'm not angry or anything eh
Shit happens c:
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Romulator - 05-10-2013
(05-10-2013, 12:55 PM)Hardarm Wrote: NOW READ PLEASE:
Can you tell me why sometimes I post an image you have to post another one just after I do it? You see that it hasn't got any reviews and you just paste one right under mine?
Now I feel bad.. I was just about to post a screenshot...
Oh well, I'll wait
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - PutraenusAlivius - 05-10-2013
(05-10-2013, 12:41 PM)Hardarm Wrote:I think it's great. I would actually use some billboards and some steam. Great job.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Adny - 05-10-2013
What an uncanny coincidence. To be fair, each of your screens posted have at least 1 direct reply (even if 50% of those replies is Robosprog ejaculating over your work).
Your's look great though Hardy (although most recent one looks a bit AMFP for my taste). My only real qualm with it would be the textures of the pipes, they don't look very natural; hard to put my finger on it.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Romulator - 05-10-2013
Well, I think it is safe now :3
It is purposely in Grayscale in case you wonder about the effect.
![[Image: j8fltt.jpg]](http://oi40.tinypic.com/j8fltt.jpg)
The larger image can be found here: http://oi40.tinypic.com/j8fltt.jpg