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Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - flamez3 - 10-24-2011
MYSTERY
This custom story came about while I was working on my other custom story (which is discontinued).
STORY
You find yourself in a morgue....Who put you here? I know it's kind of vague, but once you play the custom story you'll understand sooner or later.
This story doesn't have many voice actors (if any) so I made cinematic cut scenes to tell the story.
I have finished:
MAP 1
MAP 2
MAP 3
MAP 4
MAP 5
I need to polish things up a bit.... and add checkpoints in places.... And finish the ending... No pics as to not spoil anything
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - Kman - 10-24-2011
i find this a little hard to take seriously as you've now had 2 custom stories that were discontinued in the last 2 or 3 months...
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - flamez3 - 10-24-2011
(10-24-2011, 07:27 AM)kman Wrote: i find this a little hard to take seriously as you've now had 2 custom stories that were discontinued in the last 2 or 3 months...You cant get better in this if you don't make mistakes. Redemption was discontinued at 9 maps, i just did not think that the story was any good (wake up in prison, why?) And the other one wasn't discontinued, it was more upgraded with a better map but with the same concept.
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - Kman - 10-24-2011
(10-24-2011, 07:33 AM)flamez3 Wrote:well i think if anything you should just stay with redemption and change the story around, just because you don't like the story doesn't mean you have to abandon the project. i mean with my custom story i know i've changed it around QUITE a lot but instead of changing projects i just adjusted it to match with the original plan. i'm not trying to be rude, just trying to help...(10-24-2011, 07:27 AM)kman Wrote: i find this a little hard to take seriously as you've now had 2 custom stories that were discontinued in the last 2 or 3 months...You cant get better in this if you don't make mistakes. Redemption was discontinued at 9 maps, i just did not think that the story was any good (wake up in prison, why?) And the other one wasn't discontinued, it was more upgraded with a better map but with the same concept.
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - flamez3 - 10-24-2011
(10-24-2011, 08:10 AM)kman Wrote:The maps were poorly made and had gotten feedback it wasn't good.(10-24-2011, 07:33 AM)flamez3 Wrote:well i think if anything you should just stay with redemption and change the story around, just because you don't like the story doesn't mean you have to abandon the project. i mean with my custom story i know i've changed it around QUITE a lot but instead of changing projects i just adjusted it to match with the original plan. i'm not trying to be rude, just trying to help...(10-24-2011, 07:27 AM)kman Wrote: i find this a little hard to take seriously as you've now had 2 custom stories that were discontinued in the last 2 or 3 months...You cant get better in this if you don't make mistakes. Redemption was discontinued at 9 maps, i just did not think that the story was any good (wake up in prison, why?) And the other one wasn't discontinued, it was more upgraded with a better map but with the same concept.
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - flamez3 - 10-24-2011
(10-24-2011, 08:15 AM)flamez3 Wrote:Any feedback? Is the lighting good......Good story?(10-24-2011, 08:10 AM)kman Wrote:The maps were poorly made and had gotten feedback it wasn't good.(10-24-2011, 07:33 AM)flamez3 Wrote:well i think if anything you should just stay with redemption and change the story around, just because you don't like the story doesn't mean you have to abandon the project. i mean with my custom story i know i've changed it around QUITE a lot but instead of changing projects i just adjusted it to match with the original plan. i'm not trying to be rude, just trying to help...(10-24-2011, 07:27 AM)kman Wrote: i find this a little hard to take seriously as you've now had 2 custom stories that were discontinued in the last 2 or 3 months...You cant get better in this if you don't make mistakes. Redemption was discontinued at 9 maps, i just did not think that the story was any good (wake up in prison, why?) And the other one wasn't discontinued, it was more upgraded with a better map but with the same concept.
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - Arvuti - 10-24-2011
(10-24-2011, 09:57 AM)flamez3 Wrote:Is the lighting good...uhm(10-24-2011, 08:15 AM)flamez3 Wrote:Any feedback? Is the lighting good......Good story?(10-24-2011, 08:10 AM)kman Wrote:The maps were poorly made and had gotten feedback it wasn't good.(10-24-2011, 07:33 AM)flamez3 Wrote:well i think if anything you should just stay with redemption and change the story around, just because you don't like the story doesn't mean you have to abandon the project. i mean with my custom story i know i've changed it around QUITE a lot but instead of changing projects i just adjusted it to match with the original plan. i'm not trying to be rude, just trying to help...(10-24-2011, 07:27 AM)kman Wrote: i find this a little hard to take seriously as you've now had 2 custom stories that were discontinued in the last 2 or 3 months...You cant get better in this if you don't make mistakes. Redemption was discontinued at 9 maps, i just did not think that the story was any good (wake up in prison, why?) And the other one wasn't discontinued, it was more upgraded with a better map but with the same concept.
What the hell ?
get rid of those light rays, they look awful.
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - flamez3 - 10-24-2011
(10-24-2011, 11:01 AM)Arvuti Wrote:hahahaha, I'm not too good with billboards(10-24-2011, 09:57 AM)flamez3 Wrote:Is the lighting good...uhm(10-24-2011, 08:15 AM)flamez3 Wrote:Any feedback? Is the lighting good......Good story?(10-24-2011, 08:10 AM)kman Wrote:The maps were poorly made and had gotten feedback it wasn't good.(10-24-2011, 07:33 AM)flamez3 Wrote: You cant get better in this if you don't make mistakes. Redemption was discontinued at 9 maps, i just did not think that the story was any good (wake up in prison, why?) And the other one wasn't discontinued, it was more upgraded with a better map but with the same concept.well i think if anything you should just stay with redemption and change the story around, just because you don't like the story doesn't mean you have to abandon the project. i mean with my custom story i know i've changed it around QUITE a lot but instead of changing projects i just adjusted it to match with the original plan. i'm not trying to be rude, just trying to help...
What the hell ?
get rid of those light rays, they look awful.
Should i take them away completely, or work on them some more?RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - eliasfrost - 10-24-2011
You could make them shorter and make them a little more transparent (if that's possible).
RE: Amnesia Custom Story: Mystery - flamez3 - 10-24-2011
(10-24-2011, 11:41 AM)nackidno Wrote: You could make them shorter and make them a little more transparent (if that's possible).Hehehe, i don't know how to make them transparent.... :S