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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Khyrpa - 01-06-2012
(01-06-2012, 04:35 AM)Sel Wrote: first sculpt everLets see this after texturing
Spoiler below!
![[Image: anvil.jpg]](http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3332789/Amnesia/Props/anvil.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Acies - 01-06-2012
(01-06-2012, 04:35 AM)Sel Wrote: first sculpt everI love the attention to subtle details. For example how the surface changes dependent upon damage, it all follows a realistic and logical pattern. I have marked it here on a picture:
Spoiler below!
![[Image: xunnK.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/xunnK.jpg)
2: The "regular" surface of the anvil, quite smooth but not 100% so. Not as smooth as Nr. 1 - which is to be expected.
3. Part where a chunk has been chipped away. Least smooth part of the three, as expected.
The question marked surface is what I'm wondering about. I looked at some concept art of anvils and they seem to have one square hole and one round hole. The placement of your round hole however seems a bit random, and I first thought it was some sort of damage to the anvil. Even if it is damage - that's hell of a strong blacksmith :>
I'm also wondering what sort of tool made the scratches at the edges of the anvil?
Hopefully you'll find the feedback useful :>
It's a very nice model!
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Sel - 01-06-2012
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3332789/Anvil_by_Zureks.jpg
@the hole on the back, I guess it's on the wrong side, and too far out though haha.
As for the scratches on the legs and whatnot, I had intended to make it appear to be very old and have seen a lot of love, chances are being moved around a lot, and since those legs stick out, they'd also be more likely to get bumped by things the blacksmith was carrying by.
Sculpting is a lot easier than I thought it would be, so I might just go back and do some details on those drawers, and hopefully this will be easier to texture, since I can't get anything I like on those drawers ;____;
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Sel - 01-08-2012
![[Image: anvil3ps.png]](http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3332789/Amnesia/Props/anvil3ps.png)
200 Tris, looks like spending the last two months trying to figure out texturing has finally yielded something that isn't totally atrocious. That's nice.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Sel - 01-13-2012
more texturing practice
![[Image: wheelsidediffuse.jpg]](http://dl.dropbox.com/u/3332789/Amnesia/Props/wheelsidediffuse.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - flamez3 - 01-13-2012
Looking good man.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rapture - 01-13-2012
So how do you seam that thing? It looks like you did each piece individually but the texture wraps around nicely.
I can do the texturing if I spend some effort into it, but the seaming always gets on my nerves.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Sel - 01-13-2012
(01-13-2012, 01:54 PM)Rapture Wrote: So how do you seam that thing? It looks like you did each piece individually but the texture wraps around nicely.
I can do the texturing if I spend some effort into it, but the seaming always gets on my nerves.
I mirrored the texture in PS near the end of the geometry so it could tile, and then I added details to the texture on one side so it didn't look like it was just mirrored.
If I knew how to edit textures to tile I could do that too, but I don't ;___;
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Cryaotic - 01-13-2012
Sel is gettin' pretty bossmode at modeling, just saiyan.
Then again this is coming from someone who was impressed when he made a letter 3D in c4d - but still great work!
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - flamez3 - 01-13-2012
(01-13-2012, 06:48 PM)Cryaotic Wrote: just saiyan.x)