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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Hardarm - 08-17-2013
(08-16-2013, 02:16 AM)TheGareBearDoesNotWaver Wrote:(08-15-2013, 05:28 PM)Hardarm Wrote:Hardarm you piece of shit.(08-15-2013, 05:23 PM)i3670 Wrote:(08-15-2013, 05:19 PM)Kreekakon Wrote: How do rooms EVEN get this messy lol?
release date reveal....
Reply to Hardarm - It is a scene and the player will not be active at the moment it is shown. Therefore I need some advice on the billboards.
They look pretty good! but make them more faint. (referring to the radial blur ones)
>2013
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CorinthianMerchant - 08-19-2013
(08-15-2013, 04:59 PM)Hardarm Wrote:Hardarm, your maps are so sexy it's unbelievable...
![[Image: Robosprogroomspiderowuoeuoe01.png]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35955357/Robosprogroomspiderowuoeuoe01.png)
![[Image: Robosprogroomspiderowuoeuoe02.png]](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/35955357/Robosprogroomspiderowuoeuoe02.png)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Streetboat - 08-20-2013
I'm looking for ideas to detail this place. It's a big old steampunk boiler room; these are casks of hot water and various liquids that are pumped out to different areas. I have the lighting I like, but it all feels generic still. I'm looking for ideas on what to do with the area, not criticism on what I already have, thanks.
![[Image: poHWaDt.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/poHWaDt.jpg)
![[Image: NSte1yN.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/NSte1yN.jpg)
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - CarnivorousJelly - 08-20-2013
Hmm... when I think of steampunk, I always think of gears. Some sort of furnace to heat up the water for steam, behind a grate with a whole bunch of moving gears in front of it casting shadows, would look really neat I think. But that's just me :p
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - The chaser - 08-20-2013
(08-20-2013, 08:53 AM)Kiandra Wrote: steampunk
When I hear that word, I can only think in this:
![[Image: NNwUOQ4.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/NNwUOQ4.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Streetboat - 08-20-2013
(08-20-2013, 08:53 AM)Kiandra Wrote: Hmm... when I think of steampunk, I always think of gears. Some sort of furnace to heat up the water for steam, behind a grate with a whole bunch of moving gears in front of it casting shadows, would look really neat I think. But that's just me :p
That is an excellent idea. I had large machines in the other room which fed heat through pipes into the boilers, but no moving parts or indication that they made heat. I'll get on that.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - The chaser - 08-20-2013
Okay, jokes besides, you should look for orange lamps: usually, steampunk stuff has orange-ish lamps, and there are quite some in The Great Work (CS). If you want, you can ask for permission and then use them. Or I can do one, if you wish...
Also, it's called steampunk because a reason: Steam. You might want to add some steam pouring out of a
pipe, and I would also add dust particles, and I'd improve the window at the top too, it isn't really interesting. You might want to put some more billboards there
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Streetboat - 08-20-2013
I made it more pipe-y and open. I also created an actual two-step mechanism that will probably become a puzzle later for heating up the water. It'll be kinda like the lighthouse switch puzzle from Deterioration, but clearer.
![[Image: 3hvQykG.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/3hvQykG.jpg)
![[Image: qgu7epI.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/qgu7epI.jpg)
![[Image: TS5gpbd.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/TS5gpbd.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rapture - 08-20-2013
That billboard on the ceiling (First picture) is a bit to bright for how dark the room is. Add a spotlight in the center with a large, faint dark orange tint to brighten the room up. And place another similiar spotlight but smaller, and brighter near where the billboard is.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - 7heDubz - 08-20-2013
It's a glare effect, glares are always (almost) really bright,