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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - daortir - 12-30-2013
It looks good to me, billboard looks natural imo : >.
Can't say much more because it's basically a dark screenshot of a dark room. Kind of hard to give good advice when I can't see anything. Don't you have screenshots with light ;3 ?
Or maybe it's just my monitor, i don't know : <.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Skyy - 12-30-2013
I take one of another room when I feel done with another room :p
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Artyom - 01-02-2014
(12-30-2013, 03:08 AM)Skyy Wrote: Hey!
So im new here but I thought I might try to post a screenshot just to see what you guys think!
Keep in mind that im new to this but I hope you like it.
Spoiler below!
Thank you Romulator for the spoiler thing!
![[Image: 9a8vsx.jpg]](http://i42.tinypic.com/9a8vsx.jpg)
I think it looks alright for someone with so little experience. But keep up the work and strive for the perfect maps and you'll go far
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Skyy - 01-02-2014
Thank you
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Skyy - 01-08-2014
What do you think? ^^
Spoiler below!
![[Image: 15wfms0.jpg]](http://i39.tinypic.com/15wfms0.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - daortir - 01-08-2014
Maybe it's just me, but the hallway with shelves on the left, castle door at the end, castle window with strong light at the right reminds me too much of the original Castle Hall. Same layout, same assets, same lighting, nearly the same furniture ^^'...
It looks good though : >.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Skyy - 01-08-2014
(01-08-2014, 07:29 PM)daortir Wrote: Maybe it's just me, but the hallway with shelves on the left, castle door at the end, castle window with strong light at the right reminds me too much of the original Castle Hall. Same layout, same assets, same lighting, nearly the same furniture ^^'...Oh god.. It's pretty much the same..
It looks good though : >.
But I will try to change the layout on it! ^^
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - daortir - 01-08-2014
Good luck with that !
I still like the lighting/display, it's a very cool area you got there : >. But yeah, I think you should change something to make it more "personal", even if the similarities were accidental ^^.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Skyy - 01-08-2014
(01-08-2014, 07:51 PM)daortir Wrote: Good luck with that !Yea I try too fix it! Thank you for the feedback ^^
I still like the lighting/display, it's a very cool area you got there : >. But yeah, I think you should change something to make it more "personal", even if the similarities were accidental ^^.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - WALP - 01-08-2014
I think the billboard looks a little too extreme, and fit the spotlight quite poorly in terms of direction and generally blending together.
If you really want to keep them that strong, I would suggest you add some less powerful rays around the strong ones to blend it a bit more together, and also make sure to color the overall lighting of the room so it reacts as if the rays are as strong as they look.