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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Echohalls - 03-19-2014

Well I have 0 idea,

But I edited the map again...
Spoiler below!
[Image: tRpSMf7.jpg]



RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 03-19-2014

The tree-pillars are a little bit weird though.. try something else.


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - TheBlackWall - 03-20-2014

(03-19-2014, 04:58 PM)Echohalls Wrote: Well I have 0 idea,

But I edited the map again...
Spoiler below!
[Image: tRpSMf7.jpg]

What plain you used for the ground?


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Echohalls - 03-20-2014

No planes, i used dirt_floor from cellarbase


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - HiImShy - 03-21-2014

Hm.. I guys and girls. Im kinda new here (first post ever). This is the first "serious" room I have ever made.
I have only been using the editor for a few days so it's not that good. But what do you think? Smile

[Image: rm5ngi.jpg]


[Image: esjkb7.jpg]


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - LordOfDragons - 03-21-2014

Looks good for your first rooms Smile
This is your first time with the Level Editor?
My frst room had no Light, furnture or billboards.
It looks good for me but lets wait for other guys to reply.


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - HiImShy - 03-21-2014

(03-21-2014, 12:45 PM)MasterPig Wrote: Looks good for your first rooms Smile
This is your first time with the Level Editor?
My frst room had no Light, furnture or billboards.
It looks good for me but lets wait for other guys to reply.
Yes it's the first time with the Editor.
But I have been looking through tutorials and the maps from the game.


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - 7heDubz - 03-21-2014

I like the second more then the first, the lighting is rather bland in the first, more intresting in the second.


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - HiImShy - 03-21-2014

(03-21-2014, 01:41 PM)WIWWM Wrote: I like the second more then the first, the lighting is rather bland in the first, more intresting in the second.
What can I do to improve it?

Note: It's the same room from different angles.


RE: Screenshot criticism thread - 7heDubz - 03-21-2014

The light in the second looks like it extends further the then in the first... Huh.

The books look copy pasted in.
At school at the moment so not sure if this is helpful at all but mess with the lighting around the windows, point lights point lights point lights.