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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - DragonStar325 - 07-22-2014
This is my Amnesia CS title it is currently in development
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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Wapez - 07-23-2014
(07-22-2014, 11:50 PM)DragonStar325 Wrote: This is my Amnesia CS title it is currently in development
Mad paint skills.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Slanderous - 07-24-2014
Another one from my upcoming, unannounced story
![[Image: VgySfzp.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/VgySfzp.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Slanderous - 07-24-2014
(07-24-2014, 12:15 AM)Robosprog Wrote: Nice to see some orange/yellow to blue contrast again, however, there are a few issues!
First of all, the torches on the pillar don't cast as much light as they should. Use a dim orange pointlight on the area around it - I'd suggest a high alpha on the lights as well.
The candles should illuminate more of the actual floor on the ground, and the windows at the top should illuminate more as well.
Generally, what light you have just isn't enough, and doesn't fade out well enough.
Also, from what I -can- see of the walls, they're all the same and need welders on the seams between the walls, which seems to be a reoccurring problem with your screenies. They're also very boring, there's no detail on them. More detail all around would be good.
Thanks for your tips! I already started fixing some things, here is how it looks like so far:
Spoiler below!
![[Image: fd51mf.jpg]](http://i60.tinypic.com/fd51mf.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Slanderous - 07-24-2014
Allrighty, final version.
![[Image: 16kv8z.png]](http://i59.tinypic.com/16kv8z.png)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Daktoa - 07-29-2014
Spoiler below!
Spoiler below!
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Slanderous - 07-29-2014
First of all, your maps are huge ass and they lack a lot of details, dude. Besides, I can see some potential. You should focus more on making kinda smaller, but nicer detailed maps imho.
Oh and by the way, a map I'm doing for Neelke. I think it kinda lacks something, but what I don't know.
Spoiler below!
![[Image: y8A0VaM.jpg]](http://i.imgur.com/y8A0VaM.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Kurton - 07-29-2014
(07-29-2014, 09:39 PM)Lazzer. Wrote: Oh and by the way, a map I'm doing for Neelke. I think it kinda lacks something, but what I don't know.
Spoiler below!
Is that lava down there? If so, it should be a lot brighter and possibly emitting menacing plumes of smoke and fire
I'd also suggest to add some variation to the elevation of each levitating stone, as right now I can't help but feel like they're detailing some floor that isn't there. The ceiling could use a similar treatment, it's pretty flat as is.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Slanderous - 07-30-2014
(07-29-2014, 10:37 PM)Kurton Wrote:(07-29-2014, 09:39 PM)Lazzer. Wrote: Oh and by the way, a map I'm doing for Neelke. I think it kinda lacks something, but what I don't know.
Spoiler below!
Is that lava down there? If so, it should be a lot brighter and possibly emitting menacing plumes of smoke and fire
Indeed, it's lava. It's brighter in-game already, beleive me, it's just bit darker here when I uploaded it. Thanks for your tips though!
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - victorkim890(KimmyChimmy) - 08-01-2014
my first map for my cs but i walked through my map really slow on accident
Spoiler below!