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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-10-2015
I'd like the blue light to light up a little more of the dark areas. But otherwise, awesome.
Maybe cast a shadow, from inside the stove.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - LordOfDragons - 06-12-2015
Hey guys i already showed you a room of my map.
Well i mapped some more. I guess. Wanna see it?
Dere u go: (Spoiler alarm)
(Open in a new window for better resolution)
Another bedroom:
Spoiler below!
![[Image: ee6386f9d7.jpg]](http://puu.sh/imwAi/ee6386f9d7.jpg)
Spoiler below!
![[Image: b6d3b30b71.jpg]](http://puu.sh/imxpF/b6d3b30b71.jpg)
Spoiler below!
![[Image: e00a66fccb.jpg]](http://puu.sh/imxEA/e00a66fccb.jpg)
Spoiler below!
![[Image: bd7c8fbe45.jpg]](http://puu.sh/imz3M/bd7c8fbe45.jpg)
This took me so long and i somehow like it. So i thought i should share it with you guys.
Tell me what you think and/or what i could edit.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-13-2015
I feel like every lamp stands out too much.
This would be because the overall lighting isn't very bright. Instead, the lamps only seem to cast a small ball of light around them. Try playing with more lighting.
Make it seem like the lamps are actually emitting light into the room, and aren't just props.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - LordOfDragons - 06-13-2015
(06-13-2015, 12:54 AM)FlawlessHappiness Wrote: I feel like every lamp stands out too much.Ye, the ball of light is there, because i added a point light on every gaslamp
This would be because the overall lighting isn't very bright. Instead, the lamps only seem to cast a small ball of light around them. Try playing with more lighting.
Make it seem like the lamps are actually emitting light into the room, and aren't just props.
I don't really know how i can make it look like they are not casting these but i will experiment around.
Thanks for your criticism^^
Also i fixed the first link. It broke somehow... (Looks like Puush pictures break if you delete them in the files folder.)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-13-2015
Add another pointlight, which is the same color as the first one, but darker. Give it a bigger radius, and place it so it looks natural.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - LordOfDragons - 06-16-2015
I made a bathroom.
Spoiler below!
![[Image: d02ed3ee24.jpg]](http://puu.sh/iri7D/d02ed3ee24.jpg)
Yay?
I somehow think it's a bit to bright ._.
But yay for bathroom :L
EDIT: Where can i find the special curtain rail used for the bathroom curtain? I don't see it anywhere...
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Slanderous - 06-16-2015
(06-16-2015, 07:56 PM)LordOfDragons Wrote: I made a bathroom.
Spoiler below!
Yay?
I somehow think it's a bit to bright ._.
But yay for bathroom :L
EDIT: Where can i find the special curtain rail used for the bathroom curtain? I don't see it anywhere...
Too bright and the colors you've used are looking quite ugly
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-16-2015
(06-16-2015, 07:56 PM)LordOfDragons Wrote: I somehow think it's a bit to bright ._.
It's both too bright and too dark.
For a room with that many lamps, everything else is too dark.
The lamps in the ceiling don't seem to emit any light at all.
The lamps on the wall seem to be emitting too much light.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - LordOfDragons - 06-16-2015
(06-16-2015, 08:59 PM)FlawlessHappiness Wrote:(06-16-2015, 07:56 PM)LordOfDragons Wrote: I somehow think it's a bit to bright ._.
It's both too bright and too dark.
For a room with that many lamps, everything else is too dark.
The lamps in the ceiling don't seem to emit any light at all.
The lamps on the wall seem to be emitting too much light.
Hm i will have to look into it now, or sometimes soon. I normally dont play around with spot and point lights so i dont know how to create a perfect environment
In this room, no point and/or spotlights were added. But if the lamps on the ceiling are to weak i could try adding spotlights going straight down to the floor.
Or is there a better way to edit the lights?
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-16-2015
(06-16-2015, 09:06 PM)LordOfDragons Wrote:(06-16-2015, 08:59 PM)FlawlessHappiness Wrote:(06-16-2015, 07:56 PM)LordOfDragons Wrote: I somehow think it's a bit to bright ._.
It's both too bright and too dark.
For a room with that many lamps, everything else is too dark.
The lamps in the ceiling don't seem to emit any light at all.
The lamps on the wall seem to be emitting too much light.
Hm i will have to look into it now, or sometimes soon. I normally dont play around with spot and point lights so i dont know how to create a perfect environment
In this room, no point and/or spotlights were added. But if the lamps on the ceiling are to weak i could try adding spotlights going straight down to the floor.
Or is there a better way to edit the lights?
That's fine.
But you can always make new copies of the lamps and edit them.