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RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 06-30-2015
Like I said, I wanted to get the light right, first. But I'm going to dress the room up first, see how it looks
Thanks!EDIT: New screenshot
Spoiler below!
![[Image: 8N5hZ6i.png]](http://i.imgur.com/8N5hZ6i.png)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - 7heDubz - 06-30-2015
Everybody like "New Screenshot!" and I'm just here like "Still waiting to toy with SOMA Level editor"
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - MatiCekuriel - 06-30-2015
I'm more excited by SOMA for the level editor than the game itself
So, here is the first version of the "optional menu" of my next Custom Story, what do you think ?
Spoiler below!
![[Image: 1435679508-2015-06-30-00001.jpg]](http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2015/27/1435679508-2015-06-30-00001.jpg)
Maybe I can add some dust particles
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-30-2015
The godrays are too bright and too long.
Also, make them something else than white/gray.
Otherwise, pretty good!
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - MatiCekuriel - 06-30-2015
They are supposed to be blue :O
Well, now they are !
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 06-30-2015
If it's a sewer, shouldn't you have some stains, loose rocks, etc. laying around? That path at the right looks a bit clean.
It's looking good, apart from that!
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - MatiCekuriel - 06-30-2015
Okay, I tried to add some decals and rocks on the floor
![[Image: 1435682118-2015-06-30-00002.jpg]](http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/2015/27/1435682118-2015-06-30-00002.jpg)
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - Rahmerh - 06-30-2015
Yeah that looks better IMO, well done man!
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - FlawlessHappiness - 06-30-2015
Great job, I like the contrast. Add some low-alpha fog particles under the godrays, to simulate dust being lit up.
RE: Screenshot criticism thread - MatiCekuriel - 06-30-2015
Okay I have put a fog and a large light dust particle
Thank you, if you see something to add, tell me !
