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Dark Deeds (Temporary Name) - Fralexxelarf - 01-01-2012

First Post:

Quote:This is just one room, I just want some feedback before I start on my next one, there's really no story yet.
Keep in mind that this is my first map

http://www.mediafire.com/?z3s567opuo35hrv

Here's my updated version: http://www.mediafire.com/?8l9i7awa52yyyl5

Note!
1. I know that the notes dont say anything, YET. I have written most of them but I don't want to tell you an unfinished story.
2. Once I've made a couple more maps the story will enter closed beta.
3. Nothing is complete yet.

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - Makoton - 01-01-2012

Decided to try it, and for a first map this is really well done. Level design was simple, albeit, but with some practice, you'll get far better.

Spoiler below!

Other than the little problems, like a bit of poke-through on the walls, this is a good start to mapping as you seem to have some experience with scripting. Keep it up! Big Grin

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - Fralexxelarf - 01-01-2012

thanks! Smile

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - Lontasm - 01-02-2012

!SPOILER! I got scared shitless from that man in the closet! Damn good Big Grin

That was a beast scare Big Grin

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - thetury455 - 01-02-2012

ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - Fralexxelarf - 01-03-2012

(01-02-2012, 08:54 PM)thetury455 Wrote: ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!

Thanks

, I have fixed note texts and keys, the crowbar has been removed, there's a key inside the chest in the room with the arms, but it got invisible as the chest mesh is bad, fixed now. And I've added another 2 rooms.

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - thetury455 - 01-03-2012

(01-03-2012, 02:25 PM)Fralexxelarf Wrote:
(01-02-2012, 08:54 PM)thetury455 Wrote: ookay just finished it and ok...
1. scared the shit out of me .__.
2. whats up with the crowbar poping out of no where? mayby fix that bro.
3. allso the roo m with the arms? whats the point i didint find anything?
4. once i used the key to open the room with the arms, it didint go awey. like i still had the key e___e
5. the note was blank .__.
It was preaty scarey im gonna admit x)
good job on the scares bro im looking forword to it!

Thanks , I have fixed note texts and keys, the crowbar has been removed, there's a key inside the chest in the room with the arms, but it got invisible as the chest mesh is bad, fixed now. And I've added another 2 rooms.

its gonna be great im looking forword to it Big Grin

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - Quotentote - 01-04-2012

naked guy scared the shit out of me too :<

i found 2 small things:

1st: the first time i died (YES I DID xD) and spawned in the first room. but the door was locked :/
2nd: the 2nd machineroom key (btw both have the same name/description) is bugged in that chest. you cant see, but pick up.

keep on!

greetings

RE: My little project, need feedback :D - Fralexxelarf - 01-04-2012

(01-04-2012, 05:48 AM)Quotentote Wrote: naked guy scared the shit out of me too :<

i found 2 small things:

1st: the first time i died (YES I DID xD) and spawned in the first room. but the door was locked :/
2nd: the 2nd machineroom key (btw both have the same name/description) is bugged in that chest. you cant see, but pick up.

keep on!

greetings

Thanks for dying xD cause i forgot to unlock the door after you have died.
Everything Else is fixed, ans I'm going to upload the fixed version as soon as i get home Smile

RE: My little project - Updated - Fralexxelarf - 01-06-2012

thread updated