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Hospital Of Horror! - jessehmusic - 04-14-2012
Hospital Of Horror
You are play as "Jim" in this story , this is an Modern Time CS (Might a Short Mod)
Story
You are Jim, a man leading a happy life living alongside his brother, Eric.
But one day, for reasons unknown, Eric enters into a catatonic state, and you
immediately drive him to "Northshare Hospital," the closest health clinic you could find.
Your brother is immediately admitted, and you spend all night waiting for news of his condition,
only to be kicked out by some disgruntled hospital staff member the following morning. You make
sure to visit Eric several times that week, but his condition doesn't appear to be improving at all.
But one day, you receive a call from the hospital. Although you were expecting bad news,
what you heard on the phone sent a chill down your spine. There was screaming. The type
of screaming a man makes when he's enduring incredible agony. You could make out several
other voices as well, horrified hospital staff shouting to each other. After a moment, a loud
voice screams into your ear, "GET HERE NOW! HURRY, OR WE'LL ALL BE-"
Then comes the click, and the connection is dead.
Breathing heavily, you knew what you had to do. You grab your car keys, a jacket,
and immediately set out for Northshare Hospital, driving well above the speed limit.
When you finally arrive at Northshare, the scene that greets you look like something out
of a horror film. There's blood on the walls. Cars are burning. Bodies litter the scene,
but none of them are your brother.
Where has Eric gone? Why did the hospital call YOU apparently moments before total chaos
breaks out? You have to find answers. Dead or alive, you must find your brother
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Features
- New Lantern
- Modern Time Static Objects And Entities(Cred to White Night TEAM)
- Jump scares , and monsters
- Story Line
- Good Scripting (Cred to dnalange)
- Voice actors
- Detailed maps
- No teleporting naked guys
- Custom Ambiance Music! (CRED TO sgtyayap)
Screenshots
http://www.mediafire.com/?x3amfd5extuwy4c
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Any question or commet is welcome!
Please if not commet ,Please Vote in the Poll! and Vote In Thread Rating !
// LetsPlayHorrorGame Aka JessehMusicProd_____________________________________________________________________________________________
UPDATES
UPDATE : 14 april 2012 , 17:18
Voice actor
Detailed maps
UPDATE : 14 april 2012 , 19:16
The brother got a name now "Eric"
UPDATE :14 April 2012 , 22:32
Main Menu Map is DONE!! if all want screenshot of it , it will come!!
UPDATE 15 APRIL 2012 , 21:15 , removing lantern and replace it with flashlight
UPDATE 15 APRIL 2012 , 22:10 , New Text On Menu etc!
more screenshots will come this week!(Y) UPDATE 16 APRIL 2012 , 10:09 , Flashlight has been fixed! 2 new screenshots ready!! will give it out end of the week
UPDATE 16 APRIL 2012 , 17:49
UPDATE 16 APRIL 2012 , 20:49
No teleporting naked guys
Might make this mod in two chapters
UPDATE 17 APRIL 2012 , 20:03
Flashlight WITH Sound is fixed!!
Screenshots on Friday! DOWNLOADS
DEMO --> COMING SOON
BETA VERSION FOR BETA TESTER WILL BE GIVEN AWAY SOON
FULL VERSION --> COMING SOON
MODDB
WORK HAS BEEN PUASED MY PC HAS BEEN CRASHED , WILL UPDATE WHEN I'M BACK AT PC
back at pc , need an configer!!! that can fix the issues with the flashlight etc etc contact me at skype or here on forum @wowhasse1
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - SUMMER^ - 04-14-2012
Hey there. After looking at those pics and reading your story outline, I can say I think this looks pretty interesting. Are you looking for beta testers? I can also proofread your story to correct all the grammatical/spelling mistakes.
I put a link to my thread in my sig. You can read it if you want to see the kind of service I provide and what people think of it.
Hope to hear back from you, and good luck with your story!
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - asghdrew - 04-14-2012
Looks Great
I added this to Modern Custom Story List I made.
Voted : YES
Always great that everyone makes or uses new custom models
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - Danny Boy - 04-14-2012
Ok first of all "jump scares"? really? can't you make a bit more "smart" scares? i hope so... because i am sick of seeing boggie mans jumping at you and say "buhgaugauga!!!"
(04-14-2012, 11:46 AM)BlingBoyOto Wrote: Always great that everyone makes or uses new custom modelsAs far as i have seen in screen shots... none of them are custom models... just penumbra's models copied from White Night. And thats wirtten in their front page!
"Modern Time Static Objects And Entities(Cred to White Night TEAM)"
also a note... i don't know what you have done to your amnesia game.... but your sceen shots look like minecraft! damn no offence dude but they are very bad and didn't really get my attention... well actualy they did but for the wrong reason.
Grammar errors I ditected (this is just to help you)
", you saw blood on the wall (Outside) you went inside the hospital , you saw bodies , you saw blood"
ok i know i saw blood... you don't need to repeat yourself.
"You and your brother lived to together "
what do you mean "to"?
(Also please don't point out my own grammar erros... because i am not the one presenting my mod)
ok this was my "harsh" crittic... but your mod is not all bad! i am interested in the story! and i can't wait what you might do whit it (but why does the person in the phone calls you to take your brother? why not just call the police for that matter? well if you want the player to be in the hospital maybe it would be better for him to go to the hospital like a normal day... but then finds out thats the hopitals is being attacked or whatever... that is unless of course the person's phone call does have a good motive for someone instead asking for police help... to ask help from the protagonist)... so yeah thats what i am thinking of your mod right now... i personaly hope that you can overcome the problems i mentioned and make a good expirience!
good luck!
Danarogon
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - DnALANGE - 04-14-2012
You're doing very well there man!
Keep it going and make ppl interesting!
I votes yes, cause this has potential if it will be a long CS..
Lange..
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - jessehmusic - 04-14-2012
(04-14-2012, 01:04 PM)dnalange Wrote: You're doing very well there man!I will do my best to keep to work up!
Keep it going and make ppl interesting!
I votes yes, cause this has potential if it will be a long CS..
Lange..
Planing to make a mod but no idéa how i make a Own menu etc :S so i guess it will be an CS
ty everyone for taking the time and check it / comment it!
//JHM
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - Greven - 04-14-2012
I have to agree with Danaragon,
I have seen your posts a little here and there and arent you working on 2 other stories at the same time?
The story by itself is ok but it needs some sharpening to be that extra that everybody wants.
Otherwise good luck and hope your story come out as good as it sounds.
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - jessehmusic - 04-14-2012
(04-14-2012, 01:34 PM)Greven Wrote: I have to agree with Danaragon,Well im working on two stories but mostly this one cuz i realy wanna make a modern time CS / MOD
I have seen your posts a little here and there and arent you working on 2 other stories at the same time?
The story by itself is ok but it needs some sharpening to be that extra that everybody wants.
Otherwise good luck and hope your story come out as good as it sounds.
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - Statyk - 04-14-2012
Honestly Jessehmusic, I liked the story you gave. It really does make me interested in seeing what happened and its presentation... Take your time on this. Don't finish in a few weeks... Finish in a few months. And another tip. "Jump scares" are not a 'feature' and you only ruin the immersion for when we play because now we are expecting it. I, myself, seek higher quality fear than jump scares so I may just leave this one if it is only going to have such scares. It's a shame because the story sounds cool and I could imagine a great presentation in my mind... But I feel disappointment will be imminent. Not being offensive, I just don't like to see a great story get ruined by the use of jumpscares and possibly over-use of enemies.
More enemies =/= scarier.
RE: Hospital Of Horror! - jessehmusic - 04-14-2012
(04-14-2012, 04:07 PM)Statyk Wrote: Honestly Jessehmusic, I liked the story you gave. It really does make me interested in seeing what happened and its presentation... Take your time on this. Don't finish in a few weeks... Finish in a few months. And another tip. "Jump scares" are not a 'feature' and you only ruin the immersion for when we play because now we are expecting it. I, myself, seek higher quality fear than jump scares so I may just leave this one if it is only going to have such scares. It's a shame because the story sounds cool and I could imagine a great presentation in my mind... But I feel disappointment will be imminent. Not being offensive, I just don't like to see a great story get ruined by the use of jumpscares and possibly over-use of enemies.i will try make good scares!!
More enemies =/= scarier.
and one thing about "Doomed mansion" i dont got any ideas how to build "old house and doomed houses etc dungeons" you know what i mean ?? hospital i know ^^