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Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Nuke928 - 05-19-2012

Hi, this is my first ever custom story, which is unfinished because of some missing time.
Excuse me for bad english.


-HERRMANS HOUSE-
Featuring:
- Puzzles
- A "okay" Story
- No teleporting naked guys
- Atmosphere
- Over 14 Levels
- Nice Level Design

You are Jones, a student from England. Jones is on vacation visiting his grandmother in Germany. In a small village called Steindorf, a giant castle is located behind a very dense forest. Münzburg. There are rumors that people are murdered and tortured there and no one came ever back. Because Jones was very drunk that evening, he decided to check out if there actually is a castle. He sneaked out of the village at midnight and ventured into the dense forest. After that he can't remember. He wakes up alone in the cells deep below the earth. Now he struts in the deep cells of the castle Münzburg.
Will he escape and defeat the Evil? Or is he going to wait for death?

[Image: amnesia2012042217245025.png]

[Image: sewera.png]


[Image: basementx.jpg]


Custom Story is available in English and German.
DL: http://www.mediafire.com/?kd0qyhxs3zs7zrn


Have Fun and Feedback would be much appreciated Smile

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Adny - 05-19-2012

Pretty good screens for a first custom story, I am looking forward to playing this once I fix my computer. If English isn't your primary language (or even if it is) I'd suggest using Summer's service, he checks for grammar/spelling errors in your custom story, as well as graphic bugs.

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Game - 05-20-2012

Great Custom Story, Awesome job creating a creepy atmosphere, and good detail on maps.
The Story was pretty good aswell, and no jumpscares is a upside too. lol
Great Job on your First CS

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Nuke928 - 05-21-2012

(05-20-2012, 10:33 PM)Game Wrote: Great Custom Story, Awesome job creating a creepy atmosphere, and good detail on maps.
The Story was pretty good aswell, and no jumpscares is a upside too. lol
Great Job on your First CS
Thanks but you really didn't experience any jumpscares?

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Skashi - 05-21-2012

if you are interested, i could make you a new enemy =)

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Game - 05-22-2012

(05-21-2012, 01:28 PM)Nuke928 Wrote:
(05-20-2012, 10:33 PM)Game Wrote: Great Custom Story, Awesome job creating a creepy atmosphere, and good detail on maps.
The Story was pretty good aswell, and no jumpscares is a upside too. lol
Great Job on your First CS
Thanks but you really didn't experience any jumpscares?
When I think of the word "jumpscare" I think of teleporting naked guys flying out of closets and other places, at you. Tongue , and I didn't notice any. lol

Push - Nuke928 - 07-06-2012

Fuck, this can't get lost Sad

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - MaZiCUT - 07-06-2012

(05-21-2012, 04:57 PM)Skashi Wrote: if you are interested, i could make you a new enemy =)
And in this case i really hope you mean MAKE as in MAKE IT YOURSELF and not rip it off blizzard or another licensed game.

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Skashi - 07-06-2012

still looking forward to your story mister, keep it up Smile

RE: Herrmanns House[UNFINISHED] - Traggey - 07-08-2012

Moving this, the showcase is only for FINISHED work.