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RE: Hotel Brennenburg - NotchsNemisis - 02-09-2013 (02-09-2013, 05:42 AM)No Author Wrote:(02-09-2013, 05:37 AM)NotchsNemisis Wrote:(02-09-2013, 05:35 AM)No Author Wrote: Well try to fix that. Many people doesn't like glitches or bugs. I'm sorry I've been doing this all night, you guys don't even know what the starting map looks like, and I didn't put a download link... RE: Hotel Brennenburg - NotchsNemisis - 02-09-2013 (02-09-2013, 05:09 AM)No Author Wrote: Okay. Is that better? ![]() RE: Hotel Brennenburg - No Author - 02-09-2013 Lower the candles at least one time. Screenshot 1 : Outside the windows are pitch black. Did you forget to put a skybox ? Screenshot 2 : Lower the candles Screenshot 3 : The hallway is too empty. And some stuff in there. Screenshot 4 : Good enough in my opinion. RE: Hotel Brennenburg - NotchsNemisis - 02-09-2013 (02-09-2013, 07:20 AM)No Author Wrote: Lower the candles at least one time. 1: Shoot a skybox! Thanks for reminding me! 2: Easy 3: On it 4: ![]() (02-09-2013, 07:20 AM)No Author Wrote: Lower the candles at least one time. Updated them all, but the "night" skybox hardly looks like a night sky, where can I find one? RE: Hotel Brennenburg (MAPPER WANTED) - No Author - 02-10-2013 Idk. Search it on the internet. Or download some custom stories that has one. RE: Need Map Designer! - PutraenusAlivius - 02-10-2013 Looks nice. I have a few things in screenshot #3. Don't put huge amount of [SANITY POTION], [LAUDANUM], and [OIL] in a map. It will look weird. Make the [SANITY POTION] scarce. Use logic. One does not simply put a statue in a table! Put it in a cabinet or something. the ones in the brackets ( the []) are items. RE: Need Map Designer! - NotchsNemisis - 02-10-2013 (02-10-2013, 05:42 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: Looks nice. I have a few things in screenshot #3. I don't know what happened last night, I think I met for the statue to act like it's reading the bible... The letter on the desk also states that the castle is on lock down and the hotel's employees came around and gave everyone necessary equipment for the evacuation process, in case you encountered a decoy. If it's still odd I will definitely remove it, since this is my first custom story I have no skill in mapping, and I don't like doing it ![]() Thank you! RE: Need Map Designer! - No Author - 02-10-2013 If you need help with mapping, you can PM me if you want to. RE: Need Map Designer! - NaxEla - 02-10-2013 (02-10-2013, 05:46 AM)NotchsNemisis Wrote:(02-10-2013, 05:42 AM)JustAnotherPlayer Wrote: Looks nice. I have a few things in screenshot #3. Everyone is bad when they start off. You're never going to get better at mapping if you don't make maps. RE: Need Map Designer! - PutraenusAlivius - 02-10-2013 You can also PM me too. But, in other CS's, you usually play as a ordinary man, not a CIA agent or something. Like Thomas said on a blog post, other so-called horror games have the main character as a secret agent or something. Also, add a backstory. What is the player's name? What is the thing he must take care of? Why did the hotel made an lockdown? Story Matters. Well, that is all i have to say about this CS. |