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Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) FEEDBACK NEEDED - CrushedRaiD - 01-15-2011
Moved to another thread..
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - machosalad - 01-15-2011
Downloading right now...
6.4 Mb in file size, im expecting a big custom story :O
The story was very good to be your first ever custom story! But you can work a little more on the details; a note on the ground are sometimes easy to miss, you can see through the edges of some walls, missing billboards in the room where the ceiling was broken, and too many tinderboxes.
And adding 2 or more fake monsters after each other makes the player less scared of the monsters thinking they are fake. Like when the brute came, i knew it was fake and ran into it.
The gameplay on the other hand was simple. Maybe too simple. It would be more interesting and entertaining to play if the map included more and different puzzles instead of finding a key to the next door. Or if you want your story to be more of a scary kind, add more monster action! That is, real monster encounters with hiding places, chases and alot of scary sound to bring up the tension.
It would be fun to play it when it's done!
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - Dark Knight - 01-15-2011
(01-15-2011, 09:27 PM)CrushedRaiD Wrote: My first custom story, tell me what you think
Demo link: http://rapidshare.com/files/442752367/Home_sweet_home.rar
HEY nice map, man!
is this the end of map or not?
![[Image: endgj.th.jpg]](http://img407.imageshack.us/i/endgj.jpg/)
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - CrushedRaiD - 01-15-2011
(01-15-2011, 10:26 PM)machosalad Wrote: Downloading right now...Thx for the comment =) Yea, details are bit.. Well, crappy atm
6.4 Mb in file size, im expecting a big custom story :O
The story was very good to be your first ever custom story! But you can work a little more on the details; a note on the ground are sometimes easy to miss, you can see through the edges of some walls, missing billboards in the room where the ceiling was broken, and too many tinderboxes.
And adding 2 or more fake monsters after each other makes the player less scared of the monsters thinking they are fake. Like when the brute came, i knew it was fake and ran into it.
The gameplay on the other hand was simple. Maybe too simple. It would be more interesting and entertaining to play if the map included more and different puzzles instead of finding a key to the next door. Or if you want your story to be more of a scary kind, add more monster action! That is, real monster encounters with hiding places, chases and alot of scary sound to bring up the tension.
It would be fun to play it when it's done!
I will be fixing lot of bugs etc. when i have the time When the story is complete some of the monster encounters will be edited 
(01-15-2011, 11:27 PM)Dark Knight Wrote:The end of the map is after the basement where u find one of they keys(01-15-2011, 09:27 PM)CrushedRaiD Wrote: My first custom story, tell me what you think
Demo link: http://rapidshare.com/files/442752367/Home_sweet_home.rar
HEY nice map, man!
is this the end of map or not?
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - K1lLZONE - 01-16-2011
download limit reached
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - CrushedRaiD - 01-16-2011
(01-16-2011, 11:40 AM)K1lLZONE Wrote: download limit reached
Oh ill uptade it
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - Tottel - 01-16-2011
I haven't played it yet, but you don't need to include your map cache files. ^^
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - CrushedRaiD - 01-27-2011
Good and bad news ppl
Bad news first, the progress of this Custom story will be slower than before, becouse of school -,- I usually only have time to continue making this on weekends..
Good news, the Story is almost halfway done atm. Fixing few glitches and bugs on the maps and adding some decoration
On this weekend i should be getting it done pretty much near the end 
Remember to answer to the poll
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - Numerius - 01-28-2011
Yay! Nice map!
Let me ask, are all the monsters fake? 'Cause I cannot go further the wormhole - I am unable to go through such horrors again after finishing the original game.
I have only one advice - may be make the first location a little smaller and/or change textures - it is too grey and too repetitive. Besides that - it's great. One more question - what kind of baron (or whoever the main hero here is) keeps such statues in his house? (I'm speaking of two right after the stairs)
RE: Home, Sweet home. (Demo out now!) - CrushedRaiD - 01-28-2011
(01-28-2011, 01:53 AM)Numerius Wrote: Yay! Nice map!Hehe thx for the comment
Let me ask, are all the monsters fake? 'Cause I cannot go further the wormhole - I am unable to go through such horrors again after finishing the original game.
One more question - what kind of baron (or whoever the main hero here is) keeps such statues in his house? (I'm speaking of two right after the stairs)
Lot of stuff have been changed after the demo and about the statues.. I dont know