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Check out my custom story :D - Henriksen - 02-15-2011

Check out my progress so far Smile

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_0y-vhSjtLE

Comment on youtube Big Grin


RE: Check out my custom story :D - Tottel - 02-15-2011

Not so bad for a first story. Smile
You can fill it up with more stuff to make it more interesting; but as you said: it's work in progress.

Btw, I wouldn't have thought you were 13 until you mentioned it with caps lock on. Don't do that. Big Grin
Also, as a tip for your story, you're making it very easy for the player. The stone is just outside of the door, the note says where exactly the key is.

Also, "i" is written with a capital letter "I". For your notes.. Just saying. Smile


RE: Check out my custom story :D - Henriksen - 02-15-2011

(02-15-2011, 05:30 PM)Tottel Wrote: Not so bad for a first story. Smile
You can fill it up with more stuff to make it more interesting; but as you said: it's work in progress.

Btw, I wouldn't have thought you were 13 until you mentioned it with caps lock on. Don't do that. Big Grin
Also, as a tip for your story, you're making it very easy for the player. The stone is just outside of the door, the note says where exactly the key is.

Also, "i" is written with a capital letter "I". For your notes.. Just saying. Smile

Hi!

Thanks for the quick reply Big Grin
I will fix my signature and use some of your tips :3
And its supposed to be easy in the beginning


RE: Check out my custom story :D - Sadface - 02-15-2011

Really freaking nice! And you are only 13 years old!

Still, i agree with the Tottel with the note.

Anyway, really nice Smile Looking forward to play it.