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RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - GoDl1Kelol - 08-27-2011 Okay, you're gonna think me an arse but I'm trying to be honest. There are so many things in this that put me off. Firstly, you're not English, I reckon, so check your spelling more carefully. I saw at least 3 typos in there.Secondly, the voice acting can not be taken seriously at all which I can see is what it's aiming for. I simply turned my volume down at the area where it forces you to listen to it and waited it out. Thirdly, the player has absolutely NO idea what he's supposed to do. Spoiler below!
RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - Arvuti - 08-27-2011 Loads of flickering walls ? That's my problem, sorry about that. Also, about the typo thingy. I was supposed to spell check it but Elven offended me by stating that "fixing typos isn't a big thing" so I refused to spell check and Elven threw some sort of a spell check together. RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - GoDl1Kelol - 08-27-2011 You can't possibly make the player read like 5 pages of notes and leave in a few typos. I can see this is going in the direction of being a tad too serious and that's really pulling you out of it.I didn't read them anyway so my only concerns are really the mementos and the voice acting. Other than that I must say the levels look mighty fine. A carpet in the corridor after the dream at the beginning was like inside the wall and when you were being dragged my screen was simply spazming all over the place for some reason. Apart from that and the walls I must say you did a pretty nice job with the levels. P.S. someone tell me what I'm supposed to do with the jar so I go back in there and finish it EDIT: Oh and another thing that simply drove me to the extent of facepalming was opening the script file and reading all that "MADAFAKA COOL EPIC SHIET XDXD!!!! DDD" stuff in there. RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - Arvuti - 08-27-2011 "MADAFAKA COOL EPIC SHIET XDXD" whaaaat ? Care to explain bit more ? I'm not that involved with this custom story, other than making maps for it. RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - GoDl1Kelol - 08-27-2011 The scripter put explanations next to every key area some of which involved loads of caps and smileys.Here's a few "THE BEST EVENT EVAAAH STARTS HEERREEEE : D : D : D : D : D : D : D : D : D DDD *ULTIMATE EXCITEMENT!* (says I can't post this much images so I put spaces) DONT YA DARE TO PUT A PEEK HERE ; )! THIS IS TOO AWESOME TO BE SPOILED : D" "REAL SHIT STARTS HERE!!!" "AddEntityCollideCallback("Player", "LITITWITHFIREMOTHAFUCKAH", "LITITWITHFIREMOTHAFUCKAH", false, 1); "MOST EPIC THING IN THIS DUCKLING WORLD DD!!!" basically RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - Arvuti - 08-27-2011 Okay, when Elven comes online I will have some talking to do with him. RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - Elven - 08-27-2011 FOR MOTHER of DUCKLING DOG, PLEASE USE SPOILER! Spoiler below!
This is heavy spoiler alert. Please do not read it before you have finished story, thanks! bad news. Seems that moddb fucked up our download and it was bugged. I resent fail and it wants authorization again. Sux, but this is fact. So we replaces opening post with old download link . Works as well! Only sad thing is that we dont get statistics via that, but it is ok. Enjoy ! RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - waqas12346 - 08-27-2011 Really cool Story I was stuck in the... Spoiler below!
And the ending was great. The voice from... Spoiler below!
Anyways good luck on making the full Version. RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - Elven - 08-27-2011 Can I hope for lets play ? RE: Ray Of Hope - BETA RELEASED - waqas12346 - 08-27-2011 (08-27-2011, 06:58 PM)Elven Wrote: Can I hope for lets play ? Converting 6 parts and it will be ready to upload the Let's Play.... Start Hoping.... |