Work in progress Enjoy Your Stay at Hotel Brennenburg!

**NotchsNemisis** · 02-09-2013, 04:50 AM

My first custom story, so I am horrible at map making, but I love the scripting part Big Grin

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Here's what the story is about:

You are a detective by the name of Blane, working to investigate the unknown events at Brennenburg Castle from the 1800s. Night has come after the first day of investigation, so you decide to stay at a hotel which is a replica of a castle, and something strange occurs and the hotel employees run to alert everyone, you find many strange happenings while leaving the hotel, are these the events that happened at Brennenburg? You must escape the hotel, but first, take care of one thing.

UPDATED 2/16/2013
DOWNLOAD: http://www.mediafire.com/?ngeyd928ev0yqqc

As of right now the Mess Hall...is a mess, but don't worry I'll redo it I guess I was just testing stuff and I now realize it's really stupid... Rolleyes

**Kurton** · 02-09-2013, 05:04 AM

CIA in the 1800s Prussia. Is this time travel, or just an overt lack of research? :p

**NotchsNemisis** · 02-09-2013, 05:06 AM

(02-09-2013, 05:04 AM)Kurton Wrote: CIA in the 1800s Prussia. Is this time travel, or just an overt lack of research? :p

LOL sorry for the confusion, this takes place in the 21st century haha, you're investigating the happenings at Brennenburg from the 1800s. Tongue

**No Author** · 02-09-2013, 05:09 AM

Okay.
The first screenshot : the lights doesn't match the candle light.

The 2nd screenshot : too dark. I couldn't see a thing at the screenshot.

The 3rd screenshot : the hallway aren't dark and there are no candles on the wall.

The 4th screenshot : same as the 3rd one.

I'm liking this story but you need to improve mapping.
That's all for now.

**NotchsNemisis** · 02-09-2013, 05:10 AM

(02-09-2013, 04:50 AM)NotchsNemisis Wrote: Welcome to my very FIRST try at a custom story!

I have been very interested in scripting and design, so I thought this would be the perfect chance to test both of these, on my favorite game of ALL time!

The story so far goes like this (I plan to build the story up a LOT so don't worry.):
You are an active CIA Agent (21st CENTURY) working to investigate the unknown events at Brennenburg Castle from the 1800s. Night has come after the first day of investigation, so you decide to stay at a hotel which is a replica of the castle, and something strange happens. You must escape the castle, but first, take care of one thing.

Please ignore the spawning map, it sucks, I know. It will DEFINITELY be changed.

(02-09-2013, 05:09 AM)No Author Wrote: Okay.
The first screenshot : the lights doesn't match the candle light.

The 2nd screenshot : too dark. I couldn't see a thing at the screenshot.

The 3rd screenshot : the hallway aren't dark and there are no candles on the wall.

The 4th screenshot : same as the 3rd one.

I'm liking this story but you need to improve mapping.
That's all for now.

Thank you, this is my very first try at this, and I can tell you right now, I am horrible and designing and mapping, thanks for your feedback! Smile

**No Author** · 02-09-2013, 05:31 AM

Your welcome. You'll get use to it after a few rounds of mapping.

**NotchsNemisis** · 02-09-2013, 05:32 AM

(02-09-2013, 05:31 AM)No Author Wrote: Your welcome. You'll get use to it after a few rounds of mapping.

I've just added lighting to the maps, the first map has so many uneven glitched walls, I made it dark so you wouldn't see it Confused

**No Author** · 02-09-2013, 05:35 AM

Well try to fix that. Many people doesn't like glitches or bugs.

**NotchsNemisis** · 02-09-2013, 05:37 AM

(02-09-2013, 05:35 AM)No Author Wrote: Well try to fix that. Many people doesn't like glitches or bugs.

Agreed, a new starting map? Maybe I'll redo the main hallway, it's all goofed up, multiple walls in 1 space.

**No Author** · 02-09-2013, 05:42 AM

(02-09-2013, 05:37 AM)NotchsNemisis Wrote:
(02-09-2013, 05:35 AM)No Author Wrote: Well try to fix that. Many people doesn't like glitches or bugs.

Agreed, a new starting map? Maybe I'll redo the main hallway, it's all goofed up, multiple walls in 1 space.

I don't even know which one is the starting map, lol.
Anyway, it's all up to you. If you want to make a new one, change the screenshots and make sure there's no bugs or glitches. If you don't want to, fix all the goofed up one.