Work in progress Thief

**hoppem** · 07-08-2013, 05:24 AM

Hi guys,
well this is my first custom story, Thief! you play as a thief to steal a fortune from an old hermit, though some things become clear when you enter the house. The hermit isn't just some old guy, he's a lot more sinister and insane.
Though this is my first custom story im going to upload, I have made plenty of test stories to practice scripting and level editing. So Thief is my first story that I spent a good amount of time on (almost 4 months)
Unfortunately I do not know when this custom story will be finished, but most likely soon since im on vacation
Pics are now up! Check them out!

Images:

Spoiler below!

**Artyom** · 07-08-2013, 06:14 AM

Sounds awesome and unique, looking forward to this! Wink

**OriginalUsername** · 07-08-2013, 09:27 AM

Something eyes-like? Sounds cool, good luck!

**hoppem** · 07-10-2013, 11:38 AM

Thanks for the feedback! i appreciate it.

**FlawlessHappiness** · 07-10-2013, 06:27 PM

So far I like the pictures. We'll see what it turns out to be. Smile

**kartanonperuna** · 07-11-2013, 01:25 AM

Funny.I have similiar custom story called Painful shadows.And it was also my first story.

Yours is propably gonna be better though.

**str4wberrypanic** · 07-11-2013, 03:07 AM

Pretty decent screenshots for a first custom story.

**Artyom** · 07-11-2013, 03:25 AM

Cool screens but the sunbeams shuld definatly be reduced in visibility, they're way to strong at the moment

**hoppem** · 07-12-2013, 04:11 AM

(07-11-2013, 03:25 AM)Zandrojakov Wrote: Cool screens but the sunbeams shuld definatly be reduced in visibility, they're way to strong at the moment

Thanks! i love criticism that could help me evolve into a better mapper and scripter. I appreciate your time.

**Artyom** · 07-12-2013, 04:51 AM

(07-12-2013, 04:11 AM)hoppem Wrote:
(07-11-2013, 03:25 AM)Zandrojakov Wrote: Cool screens but the sunbeams shuld definatly be reduced in visibility, they're way to strong at the moment

Thanks! i love criticism that could help me evolve into a better mapper and scripter. I appreciate your time.

Anytime