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Request What could I do better in my CS?
serbusfish Offline
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What could I do better in my CS?

Despite 'completing' my custom story a while back i'm wanting to update it a bit in an attempt to improve things. So far i've decided to include a monster earlier on as its quite a while before your first true encounter occurs (I should have introduced them much earlier) but i'm not sure what else could be done better.

So, if anyone has time it'd be really appreciated if you could try out the story in its current state and let me know what you liked and didnt like. And of course I will put everyone who provides constructive feedback into the end credits Big Grin

http://www.moddb.com/mods/escape-from-brackenburg

(This post was last modified: 01-05-2014, 02:00 PM by serbusfish.)
01-05-2014, 01:56 PM
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RE: What could I do better in my CS?

I haven't played the story, so this is based on what i know Smile
Ok, Wall of text...


Level Editting:Judging from the pictures, you level editting seems to be pretty good. Don't hang in too much of it there.
If the level editting is done, it's done. Of course if you're a perfectionist you can spend the rest of your life looking to add all the tiniest details... Don't spend your energy on this.
You can quickly go through the maps thinking:
"Would this place be extra dirty, and should I place more decals?"
"Is there something special about this place that I need to add something for the player to notice?"
"Am I fair enough towards the player" (Ex. Having loads of rooms completely dark is not fair. Having two monsters chasing you from each side is not fair.)

Always remember that this is not "The impossible game", making it as hard as possible.
This is a game that is made to be played through, to get the feelings, the ambience and the gameplay.
I'm only mentioning it to be sure that you know. You probably already do Smile

Scripting:
Now, monsters. Don't bring in the monster too early. Always think about when you're building up for something to happen, and when you've released the tension.

Bringing in a monster is usually the peak of a tension-curve.
So in the beginning, starting out with sounds, scripted scenes with debris or screams, notes that declare that something has been let loose in the mansion. Then (What most horror games do is) cut all the sound, as you walk towards the closed door... Silence... Grab the door, slowly open it, and THERE it is, the monster, and you run for your life, hiding.
Or you could do it in another way. Just remember to build up and release.
One thing that is pretty cool is that you can build up, and then just leave the build close to the peak. The player know that it's gonna happen, but he doesn't know when. Still, you need the climax. Otherwise the player gets trust issues and you loose some credit.

Ok, now after the monster. Do you have silence after the monster, the climax, the peak?
There has to be a safe zone somewhere. Somewhere the player knows it's safe to be.
Because if it's safe to be where you are now, it probably NOT safe where you're going to go.
Think of the Backhall and the Storage.
If you watched the "Amnesia WTF" video (Link at the bottom), and you're playing Amnesia for the first time, you'd know that the Storage is a BAAAAD place to be.
You feel so safe in the Backhall (Though something is wrong), but you're destined to go explore the Storage, and you don't want to. That's what safe-zones does. So remember them. Usually have them after an encounter.

Now as the game goes on, you can have more and more peaks, but remember that the last one must be the biggest one. The one where the only thing the player is focused on is the game.

Great, I think that's what I had to say. I hope you understood, and have a nice time editting Smile

The Amnesia WTF video:
Spoiler below!






Trying is the first step to success.
(This post was last modified: 01-05-2014, 09:11 PM by FlawlessHappiness.)
01-05-2014, 09:10 PM
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RE: What could I do better in my CS?

Now that's a pretty good reply despite you not actually playing the story Big Grin

Good advice on the monster, when I originally made the story I didnt want to introduce one too early but in retrospect I left it too long (over an hour into the story) but I will make sure the build up + execution makes sense rather than stick one in for the sake of it.

I am fairly happy with the level design, but stuff like pacing, scares, sounds, etc im open to making changes to if needs be.

01-06-2014, 07:52 PM
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RE: What could I do better in my CS?

For scripted events, in my opinion, you should always focus on making them realistic.
If the place you're walking around in is half destroyed, you could make a scripted scene where some debris is falling down and scares the player.

If there, according to the story, is hidden a body in a closet, make it fall out and scare the player.

Trying is the first step to success.
01-07-2014, 09:25 AM
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