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Are you looking custom stories? 
			 
			
			
			
			
				
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	| 03-27-2014, 12:14 PM  | 
	
		
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RE: Are you looking custom stories? 
			 
			
				You should link to the page for the mod, not just the download. Of course you can have a direct download link for easy access, but don't exclude the mod page because many will want to know more about the mod before downloading it. At least describe them or something.
			 
			
			
 
			
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	| 03-27-2014, 02:31 PM  | 
	
		
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		AlluNeesia 
 
 
		
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RE: Are you looking custom stories? 
			 
			
				Okey, thanks for tip   
			 
			
			
			
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	| 03-27-2014, 03:54 PM  | 
	
		
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RE: Are you looking custom stories? 
			 
			
				So why won't you post some screenshots?
			 
			
			
			
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	| 03-28-2014, 01:09 PM  | 
	
		
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		AlluNeesia 
 
 
		
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RE: Are you looking custom stories? 
			 
			
				I can post some screenshots. 
  
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		Slanderous 
 
 
		
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RE: Are you looking custom stories? 
			 
			
				Maybe you could do it right now, please ? :3
			 
			
			
			
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RE: Are you looking custom stories? 
			 
			
				Well I was excited to download these, but after I download all the stories and look at the maps? I mean where is your actual work? Everything is just messed up and many maps are like done under 10 minutes, sigh. 
 
You must improve a lot, I mean a lot! This is just laziness at your best. 
I don't wanna waste my time playing these craps. Sorry, I'm just giving my honest opinion and critizing this. 
 
- Don't ever rush your maps 
- Make maps make sense, use your imagination 
- Pay attention to add many details in your maps (Very important) 
- Create nice, unique story (Don't copy stories from other creators) 
- Add music 
- Add atmosphere (all the maps are just black and dark, use pointlights, boxlights and spotlights etc.) Beginner advices for you. 
- Use script_areas smartly don't spam them 
- Use smart scares (No cheap jumpscares ever) ruins 
atmosphere constantly and damages player's gameplay always and motivation to continue mod. 
- Make maps looks decent, I mean not just couple rooms and done. 
- Use your time a lot when working with maps / scripts. 
 
I hope you can learn for my tips. Good luck if you still are making more stories.
			 
			
			
 
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