Umm.. this map takes time to play few minutes... Too short.. and let me start your mistakes and negative sides on your first map.. Too many but it was ok for your first job.
First: The lighting was bad, first zombie outside was glitched and dummy spot to catch you.
Second: So many texture errors with walls and floors and that outside needs improvement, useless string and other items because you have lantern full of oil at begin.. then you have Oils, sanity potions its just not good for a scary and good custom story.
Third: There is no story at all no scripting whatsoever. Only description was nice at begin.
Okay dont be mad i just teach you to get some understand why this map is so bad
But you are beginner like i am sort of..
Fix these on your full release or next upcoming project
Thanks anyway !