I just played through your story and it was the most beautiful experience of my life. The atmosphere, models, textures, music everything was perfect and it was easily the most high quality custom story I have ever played in Amnesia, I picked up the master orb but didn't know what to do after that, I'm assuming that I finished the story?
If so then I beg you to please keep working on it, but if you don't I understand, this is quite the mammoth undertaking.
I only realized afterwards that there were no monsters, it didn't bother me in game because I was so immersed and captivated whilst playing it.
You sir, are now my number one custom story creator, this was just brilliant!
Whats happening with Second Aid, are you still working on it? Because that was also an awesome story