Man, i played your Custom Story, and, THAT WAS FUCKING SCARY!!!
There was a part when you push a painting, and behind that painting there it is a GIANT SKULL, Dude i almost fell off my chair!!! A Screamed so loud, that my mom woke up!!! Nice Work!! Nice Work!!!
There will be a part 2, I presume, soo, try to put more scary events, sometimes they are scarier than monsters dude, for exemple a big armor following the player on the darkness, uhh, that would be scary like an old vagina!
I think, this is my feedback!!
Nice Work on the first demo!!