"The Ghosts"

[AmnesiaIsScary :S]

This is a story about ghost in amnesia , Enjoy .

"The Ghosts" DEMO :

http://www.mediafire.com/?6gn7wnwbx7f0h73

Pictures:
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Tell me how it is

[Arvuti]

slow down there buddy, provide us with screenshots or something. I am not going to download something without knowing what it is.

[HumiliatioN]

Okay first of all I've seen worse custom stories.

First I was thinking the "Custom story description" "Shitty custom story" What?

Second: Rooms are pretty rushed ones... and nothing scary, couple monsters randomly every room almost.

Third: There is not any scares we are not excepting. There is always feeling now something is gonna happen that's not scary at some points.

Fourth: Short, basic story but all is missing the originality, entertainment, nothing new! Just same couple hour projects and there are annoying to play because players are not feeling anything new or unique in these stories.

Sorry but spend more time building better project. But this was not too bad. It was ok I guess.

Just trying to help you pal and make some improvements when you are making next custom story.

[Bearscar]

It was ok.

[AmnesiaIsScary :S]

Yeah , im a begginer

[ManiacGamingHD]

The last Justine Monster scared me, When I saw blood, I knew it what's gonna happen. And my friend says that he got a note near the grunt legs that "End of Demo", I didn't get the note. Anyways, Great story and great scares. (REP+)

[AmnesiaIsScary :S]

The last Justine Monster scared me, When I saw blood, I knew it what's gonna happen. And my friend says that he got a note near the grunt legs that "End of Demo", I didn't get the note. Anyways, Great story and great scares.

Positive comment ! yey !

Thanks I know what Happened with the note .. I uploaded the map when it was deleted then I re upload it .. anyway I don't if you are good at making stories or not but if you are not good so I can help you

[Dark Knight]

first grunt was damn scary!

but overall, seems that map more funny than scary
keep it up.

[AmnesiaIsScary :S]

first grunt was damn scary!

but overall, seems that map more funny than scary
keep it up.

There was no grunt in my map

[ManiacGamingHD]

first grunt was damn scary!

but overall, seems that map more funny than scary
keep it up.

There was no grunt in my map

Oh don't worry, He must be seeing things. I think he played Amnesia ALOT!