Amnesie Custom Story - Olaf's Demise!

[I will disagree]

I didn't try the story out yet but why being so evil on him... constructive criticism can be made with more different ways, if you make it the creator can learn and trust you, you have at least to say him that he's got a chance to be a great artist, just keeping on training. You can't say, "this map is bad because it's poorly made and that's what I think", it will have a negative impact to the author... that's what I think, and I think my poor english is quite understandable to everyone....

Constructive criticism is criticism with asslicking. Most people need that or they get offended.

Håller på att göra det du gör! (google translator ftw)