The Guest - Custom story

[Obliviator27]

While I'm at it, I may as well play & review this one too. What-ho!
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Spoiler below!

- I'd recommend Mediafire as the place to upload these. But whatever floats your boat.
- map_cache files don't need to be included. They just increase filesize.
- Grammar Nazi brain mode activated. If the woodcutter found THE castle, that would mean that it's a specific castle, which you then fail to specify. It should be A castle. Don't take it to heart.
- Not bad so far. I would recommend a boxlight, though.
- I can't go there without lantern. You forgot an "a". At this point I will assume English isn't your first language.
- Oh boy. My Grammar Nazi brain is exploding. I'll not comment on the errors, as it'll make quite thewall of text.
- Some of your Gobo's are upside down.
- Common lighting error. Light doesn't shine through windows in all directions.
- I'm told to make a ladder....but I'm not sure how to go about doing that, as I cannot jump.
- Ah, use the saw with the wood pile.
- Thank you, random naked guy. Not sure why he's here, or how I know he used to own the castle.
- I'd like my lantern, please. I can't see anything.
- Unfortunately, I hit the "BAMBAMBAM" scare, which then killed suspense. The creepy whisper noise I Heard when opening the chest with three tinderboxes was nice, though.
- Ooh, a button.
- Lock the bedroom door...I would, if I had the key.
- Ah, got it.
- Enlarged, locked closet. I detect a monster attack shortly.
- Knew it!
- Jeez, my guy certainly likes to intrude on this castle. "Oh, let's go sleep in the bed, drink some wine, and have a good time."
- To the Wine Cellar!
- YES! Welders between the cellarbase walls. Ah, people are finally wising up.
- Man, my guy is a jerk. Let's sell this guy's wine off!
- Did you really just not have the bottle in there at all? Good timing, though. I was feeling the same way. Who needs the bottle anyways?
- And done.

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Honestly some of the best mapping I've seen released recently. Things could be better, here and there, but it was relatively well done. Not much of a story, nor reason as to continue forward, but it's definitely not bad. Keep it up!