The Stew Adventures Ep1 (need feedback)

[Obliviator27]

Coming on to frictional forum, posting your map and asking for positive feedback. I find this amusing.
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Spoiler below!

- You didn't even package your custom story correctly. I had to make a folder to put it in.
- Ian's_map? HAHAHAHA?
- Oh lord. Words cannot describe how i feel looking at this room. Evidently you just had fun with the scale tool.
- Wall clipping. Proper grid placement will eliminate this. You also have a rather large gap in the wall.
- You should really name all of your keys.
- Ridiculously giant piece of paper.
- The scale on these candles is ridiculous.
- You want to put welders between all castlebase walls, as well as cellarbase.
- Using the key breaks the door?
- Picked the middle door and started running. Got caught.
- There's not even a ceiling in these halls.
- Oh. I'm glad you put a message detailing that.
- To the Rec-Room, I suppose.
- Wait...the floor disappears?
- Slaughtered. Hm.
- Is...that the end? I guess so, as I can't move.

Positive feedback? I think not. This map is all very basic scripting, horrible mapping, and an attempt to be "funny". Evidently you've not heard of Gridlocking. This is one of those maps that people make to mess around in, and is not one for releasing. As proud as you may be of this map, you need to spend way more time making it significantly better.