[WIP] Try out my map please! want feedback :)

[SilentStriker]

Is this story supposed to be serious or just for fun?

I played it and here is what I think...

-Cheap scares

-Unoriginal scares

-Brute you cannot escape

-Big dark empty corridor that is unecessery

-No billboards or lighting in the windows

and then the stairs between 2 maps.. what was that? and you could have built it better because it looks weird when you tilt the walls

Good hidden with the second floor in the bedroom but annoying that you need to run down the corridor to get 3 boxes and then run back

I didn't finish it but this was the things I reacted to.
And it's mostly negative because I don't like cheap stories, I like the well made with a good story and no cheap scares