[REQUEST] Storyline

[Danny Boy]

Hi!


Spent latest 4 Months learning the "Hpl-Engine"
I know the full scripting-language and mapping and want to create a good creepy about 30 Minute exciting story containing puzzles, scary events, but it needs a good storyline which makes the player want to continue playing.
I cant think of anything good, i dont want to copy another custom story´s Story.

Please reply if you know a good story that you would like to be created!
Of course, if i descide to use the story you post, you will be mentioned in the Credits.

That´s pretty much it. Thanks for reading.

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There was once appon a time a elf that lived in the florest, the elf likes turtles and does things to little girls... but one day he woke up in a cave for no good reason... so he kept going and going trough the darkness... there he found a nugget... so, the elf picked it up... and as he gave the first bite... a flying dead glowing cropse that died because he was dead said "luke!!! i am your father's corpse!!!" the elf screamed whit all his might! and ran away!!! the corpse kept on following him as he kept saying "JAAASON!!!", but luckly the elf picked up a giant purple dildo and managed to kick his father's dead flying corpse that died because it was dead to the ground! he still kept screaming "JAAASON!!!" but he could not manage to follow you any more for he was dead now... as the elf kept on advancing on the cave he saw a light at the end of a tunnel... excited, he run as fast as he could to the end of that crazy place... but then he realised that the light was much more near then before... even to the fact he was running really fast... has he stopped to check that strange happaning... he heard a train sound... and so he realised he was on a subway all this time! and a train was whit all its speed to a collision corse whit the elf!!! the elf ran and ran as fast has he could... but he didn't managed to ran as fast as he did before for he was really tired from the stupid running he as done before... tired, he fell and slamed his head on the floor... confused he tryes to get up... but the train was too close for the elfe to escape from, has the last seconds of his life were passing he noticed there was a troll face in the front of the train! a tear came out of the elfs left eye as he heard the train say "Problem?"... the next second... the elfe was dead...


Custom story material here!!!! any one? does any one want this piece of garbage materpiece?
any one?