Could I get some feedback on this please?

[Khyrpa]

Masters of development? You have TDD maps already in your folders to study from. Just compare the storage map to yours and you should get tons of ideas how to improve. Its all in the detail.

Also giving sanity damage effect from pig corpses might not be a good idea. People who play custom stories have likely seen that same stuff a thousand times.

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Remember that pointlights, particles, Static decals and billboards are your best friend in a detailed map.