Could I get some feedback on this please?

[Putmalk]

your name unfortunately lives up to itself :/

Thank you. The reason I'm being this picky, isn't to be negative, but because he said "I would go directly to the masters at development for some feedback on this video.". Being picky is what's expected from a "master".

Dude, thank you. I really appreciate any attempts to get better. Although I think I'm a better scripter than mapper. :/

Maybe it's also best to state that the monster didn't spawn because I opened the chest, it happens after a certain time has passed after taking the crowbar.