Could I get some feedback on this please?

[Putmalk]

Come on Cranky Old Man he is new here and just learning don't be too harsh with him.

I'm really surprised how good mapping is and entertainment is really creepy. I liked it and you have potential and you should continue it.. but just for hint don't ruin player atmosphere adding lots of cheap scares and jumpy ones.

I don't really add jumpy ones unless it hasn't happened in a while...did you see any cheap scares in the video? O_O And thank you very much. I'm not particularly "new", yeah I just signed up but I mapped a while back, I just never posted it and I didn't like its quality after a while, so I am doing test maps just to build up my quality for creating environments.