[WIP] A Visit To George

[Leeeyam]

this seems predictable.. let me guess, george is a madman who uses people to make these monsters who just casually walk around his building aimlessly and somehow figure out they dont like your guts, so theyre after you.
there are two conclusions to rescuing your friends in this story that i can think of at the moment:

1. you dont even meet the friends throughout the story. you might even leave the building without even mentioning them in the story

2. you finaly reach your friends, but theyre sadly dead, spread as corpses around the room, and you have escape this mad house by yourself




id recommend getting a better polished story, or just being creative. frankly ill be watching this one to see how it goes.

dont take this critisism (too)personally.. i just dislike the fact that some just dont give a dang about the story anymore..

I totally agree with you here, the most popular stories are also the most creative ones.

Sadly, I think he's too far into making this, it's a little late to go back ^^