"The Attic" (Chapter 2) Custom Story

[Elven]

Not needed, and disrespectful. -1.

It's criticism.
If you didn't want people to judge your custom story, then put it on some site where you can turn of comments.

Also, "Fuck it, I'm out of here," ruined the professional feel the story had up until then.
"Better get out of here" would have sufficed.

One part where I complitely disagree...

Developers can make character say the fuck they want...

Think, you are in fucked up place, will you say: "I will get out of here"...

If he says "Fuck this shit, ima gonna get the fuck out of here!" -> thats more emotional and fits way better.

I cant imagine him saying in the middle of blooded place "Oh, I better get out of here!"... That would be emotionless.

Developers do what the fuck they want. If you dont like it, dont play it. You have right to say your opinion as you want, but you have no right to order them to do something . For example, i got countless comments about Interrogation that death says too much epic and talks freely etc. I dont give a fuck, this is how death is, thats what person he is and i will continue making him same way. That is his personality.

I personally didn't like Chapter 2, could have been much better... But thats what I think and I hope chapter 3 will be much better. At least trailer mapping wasnt bad.