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Work in progress A Visit To George
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RE: A Visit To George

(04-22-2012, 02:28 PM)darkadders Wrote: this seems predictable.. let me guess, george is a madman who uses people to make these monsters who just casually walk around his building aimlessly and somehow figure out they dont like your guts, so theyre after you.
there are two conclusions to rescuing your friends in this story that i can think of at the moment:

1. you dont even meet the friends throughout the story. you might even leave the building without even mentioning them in the story

2. you finaly reach your friends, but theyre sadly dead, spread as corpses around the room, and you have escape this mad house by yourself




id recommend getting a better polished story, or just being creative. frankly ill be watching this one to see how it goes.

dont take this critisism (too)personally.. i just dislike the fact that some just dont give a dang about the story anymore..
Nope... I am actually make one of the friends alive.
(04-22-2012, 11:41 AM)Robosprog Wrote: Needs roof, and the landing kinda area needs a plane underneath as you can see right through the floor there right now.
Its not finished yet...
(This post was last modified: 04-23-2012, 05:35 PM by secretcastle.)
04-23-2012, 05:35 PM
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A Visit To George - by secretcastle - 04-22-2012, 10:47 AM
RE: A Visit To George - by SonOfLiberty796 - 04-22-2012, 11:12 AM
RE: A Visit To George - by Mine Turtle - 04-22-2012, 02:28 PM
RE: A Visit To George - by Leeeyam - 04-23-2012, 11:41 AM
RE: A Visit To George - by secretcastle - 04-23-2012, 05:35 PM
RE: A Visit To George - by Rapture - 04-23-2012, 01:40 PM
RE: A Visit To George - by secretcastle - 05-10-2012, 01:36 PM
RE: A Visit To George - by lllDash - 05-14-2012, 01:10 AM



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