The School of the Dead...Brain Dead

[nathanmcb]

Some critique to help ya improve on this.

The levels look very bland, they need much more detail.

The lighting is very off, I could see light sipping through the walls which is never a good thing.
Things like bright red rooms are NOT scary, it just looks odd.

And as for jumpscares do remember to actually make some sense out of them, random scares that are just there for no other reason but to scare you are much on amateur level

Good luck with this.

The lighting is bland because this set was made for the video, on the real thing it will look a lot more beautiful
and my school is bland hehe but I promise it will look a lot better on the real story