The escape chapter one

[Mine Turtle]

let me get this straight. IF THIS WAS his first custom story, which is isnt: "the unsubscribe killer", it does NOT justify the lack of storyline. a CS with lack of a somewhat decent storyline could mainly be classified as an unserious map, if the creator decides to release it. frankly, im SO SICK of people using an "amnesia" storyline. in "amnesia" storyline cases; and i promise you this; 95% of the cases of these stories, you never know WHAT the fuck got the character to where he started, or WHY the fuck hes there in the first place. these stories are so faked, copied and stolen from other people. stolen, as in using the same things all over again. jumpscares; keyhunts, crowbarbreaking of doors; CLIMBING THROUGH A CASUAL CAVERN OF ROCK; etc.

even though this guy puts work into his mapping (which i cannot say for sure yet, but ill take your word on it for now), it will be absolutely USELESS unless he actually makes a functional, solid "exposition", "Rising action", "Climax", "Falling action", and "resolution" type of story. those principles build up a SHORT story; and it should be in every custom story out there. making a custom story only based on scaring people without reason and without sense; would IMO be worse than not making a custom story at all.