Custom Story Feedback and Possible Enrolement.

[Zinnkio]

I'm currently making a custom story but I haven't really thought of a storyline yet. I've sort of just thrown myself into level editing and scripting without any clue of where I'll end up.

Here is a link to the video that I made as like a taster for the custom story so far (I will provide attachment if anyone wishes to play it themselves...just ask)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L00rUV_dR7E

Any feedback for it so far would be much appreciated and If anyone would like to accompany me on making this custom story then I don't see why you can't help. I'll add you on Skype if you have it just for the ease of communication. If anyone thinks I should start over then again... anyone can help out whether it's scripting, level editing or storyline making because I sure could use some help with that.

Thanks in advance for any feedback

Zinnkio

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I think I may have posted in the wrong section :/